I dare say...this is the best yatori fanfic ever...I wouldn’t be suprised if this story become storyline and writing...

I've only seen the anime, so I don't know what parts of this are from later in the manga and what is your invention, but it's good so far.

Hello, I can say that I'm eagerly looking forward to next chapter for a long time. So, please keep it up, I'll definitely read your story once again

I can't tell if your still active but I have to say this has been an amazing find/read. I feel you ha e left this open for more to take place.
I understand that life happens, though if you ever update this I will definitely be back to continue reading this story!

Not entirely sure if you're still active in this fandom or anything (yet... haven't checked your profile at the time of writing this)

But I've got to say, this... This was an Absolutely. Fabulous. Read... but it kinda feels partially unfinished to me, and I would dearly love to see more if you're still writing.

WOW. Just...WOW. Words can't even express how good this story is. You, my friend, should definitely consider becoming a writer, if you haven't already. This story is too amazing for the ranks of fanfiction! Maybe you could contact the Noragami team and send this to them or something?! Who knows!? Maybe they'll also end up liking it so much that they'll integrate it into the real storyline? I'm serious. It's just... the way you made everything work out, added a plot twist, and qualified the changes with actual facts from the anime, resulted in a beautiful read. Once I started reading, I was hooked- all the way to the end. I have to say, you definitely surpassed my expectations. I wasn't expecting to find such a creative, original, and SIMPLY PERFECT story on fanfiction. One question: Is the story still ongoing or abandoned/completed? I hope it's still ongoing... :D

Man... This turned out to be a fantastic and genius direction to take these two. I love this story, and I hope it continues! :O

Hoping you’ll come back since there are new chapters to the manga :)

Well this is sad cause I just joined this fandom and u haven’t updated in so long ! But I have to tell you are are a beautiful writer! I really hope that you come back to this is so wonderul

I'm sorry for only posting one review - your story certainly warrants many, many more glowing reviews - but I was so captivated by it that I hardly paused for sleep, let alone reviewing each chapter. I fell completely in love with Noragami last summer (the anime) so much so that I then read the entire manga and was desolate when it went on hiatus.

I had not heard of the Tsukuyomi Theory before your fic. After researching it, I now whole-heartedly believe this should be - and hope it will become - cannon. I love how you embellished Hiyori's family history and revealed her reincarnation. Your story was obviously crafted with care and love.

Thank you for sharing it with this terribly underpopulated fandom. I appreciate you offering some amount of closure and emotional gratification before stepping back from this fic. If this is where you choose to end it, I will be satisfied; however, I sincerely hope you pick it up again and continue giving us the Yatori love we all so long for!

Love this!

Please finish this! It's been almost 8 months since your last update, I absolutely love this story, and I hope something like this becomes canon in the manga when the hiatus ends. This is my favorite Noragami fanfiction I've read so far!

Yeah, Im just going to keep this one bookmarked and see how the real story goes compared to this. It is amazing.

beautiful story. Can't wait to read more.

Hi again! Got caught up in many other things for a while but now finally got to reading again. I'm absolutely intrigued by this story and can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!