Reviews for Hold On
Magic Magician chapter 21 . 5/27
My God, I had even forgotten this perfect fic existed. As always, your writing is truly a pleasure to read. So happy you updated this amazing story! Thanks so much for writing and sharing it.
honeytea8 chapter 11 . 3/19
I forgot how hard this chapter hit me the first time a read it. Especially the scene with Tokuma and Hiashi. “Neji is a beautiful boy” is just replaying in my head.
honeytea8 chapter 10 . 3/19
Shikamaru hacked away at the trees he could see, just to find more trees hidden behind—oh my!
honeytea8 chapter 8 . 3/18
Re-reading this amazing fic for the second time. And man, that scene with Shino and Kiba cracked me up, and Naruto’s commentary had me downright hollering!
Katarina325 chapter 20 . 5/31/2019
This is absolutely amazing please continue it
BurntMarshmallow chapter 20 . 9/6/2018
I am loving your story! I am completely invested in how all the little pieces are going to come together and I love being taken for the ride.
I hope your writers block lifts soon, I’d love to continue reading :)
AlaskaAby chapter 20 . 10/15/2017
Will they return flying over those birds? Mmhhhh, Cute
I'm in a writer's block too. Other fandoms are very distracting indeed. (I'm in Saint Seiya, Naruto, DB, BNHA, Homestuck, Batman and Inception)

PS Sorry for the english.
EphemeralStar chapter 19 . 9/20/2017
Gosh this story has had my emotions all over the place, absolutely beautiful. It's been so long sinceI've read such a good fic. I look forward to the next chapter!
Natsuno Lawliet chapter 19 . 9/13/2017
HOLY SHIT! I have read your fic in two days, I had no sleep. Jesus. Please, tell me you didn't leave it like this... tell me you will update soon. I'm begging you T.t
whiskeredschatz chapter 19 . 7/17/2017
This is an exceptionally well-written story and could easily be published, were it not fanfiction. I honestly encourage you to pursue writing professionally. I would gladly buy a book of yours in the future. I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. I have devoured it over the course of 2 days. This has not happened to me since I discovered Shogun. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this. Cheers
F2 chapter 19 . 6/18/2017
I hope this will have a happy ending
el.paradox chapter 19 . 6/15/2017
Ino really gives herself too little credit. Her professionalism during the internal conflicts is commendable and I like that she even let Kiba's jabs slide to tell him to grow up. In all this suspicion and uncertainty only she understood Neji's character well enough to see that he does care and she knows when to push and when to leave him alone. I'm glad Neji let her know that she is doing well.

And Neji... why must he keep protecting others at the cost of himself T_T

Thanks for the update! Take care till next time.
callipso89 chapter 19 . 6/13/2017
You are the best. This is the coolest story I've read, please keep up the marvelous work.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Neji drama rocks! :D
xunqianyu chapter 19 . 6/12/2017
Admire your story is really really fascinating!
onlyagirl chapter 19 . 6/12/2017
OH MY GOD, YOU'RE BACK! What a chapter!
Ahh my babies, from kisses, love and jealousy to outright distrust and hostility. I miss those days...
I fucking hate Danzo. I havev no idea what is going on, but I hate him.
WTF happened to Shikamaru?!
Soooo many things that we don't know yet... This is exiting!
Shikamaru telling Naruto about his 'distraction' was great, we needed some lighthearted scenes in such a heavy plot.
This is going great, I'm loving it. I kinda want my babies to be together but we have a looong way to go it seems.
Thanks for the chapter and I hope that you would update again soon! x
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