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Casnew chapter 1 . 11/22/2019 Loved this idea. I just missed two lines from Sam's mind. One instance of Sam repressing. Like the stray thought 'bit cold' or the 'luci' mention makes his mind flinch and mumble 'repress' and regulate chemicals. I mean he's trying for 'normal' and clearly already doing that (and dissociating? With the silent screaming, and his mind seems not all there..). It would've been nice to make it obvious, with a Dean reaction. When Sam's mind talks about grace, "Strong. Powerful. Grace" in my mind he also adds his observations "Not freezing. Not fire." Especially since the wind effect makes it seem like Gabe's grace is like wind. Which fits him very well. PS. "Assbutt" is of the highest of insults, mainly used for apocalyptic villains. Seems a bit harsh... (And did not like the block of Casknew, wtf. That's nutz.) |
Sue chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 Very entertaining story, original, funny, you wrote the characters as though you'd invented them yourself, you knew them so well! I think this would actually have made an awesome episode for the show, maybe you should send it to them? I very much hope to read more from you in the near future.x |
Mist chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 SQUEEEEE |
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 12/17/2018 Yes! Such a cool idea about how their minds were represented. Always happy for a Destiel ending. Great story! |
Kat A. Coop chapter 1 . 7/25/2018 Excellent job! |
lovejaneausten chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 Wow, crazy prompt. There's been days I reaaally wished for something like this to happen. So easy to procrastinate by wishing. Ech, that went maudlin. Anyway, this is cute:( |
AyaJune chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 Also i love the starting! "Witches. It's always fucking witches." Priceless! |
AyaJune chapter 1 . 2/27/2018 Oh...i ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! It's brilliant! Words can not tell you how much I completely adore this! It's perfect! The perfect length. The perfect plot. The perfect STORY! The characters are all (mostly) in character! It's got just the right amount of humour and seriousness. The sences are all perfectly put together and it's all written beautifully, perfectly! I love it, i truly do! |
les7091 chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 I loved this story! Too cute. I can just imagine a tiny Dean being a little bastard, but a cutie around Cas. Someone draw it! |
victoriaklarissa chapter 1 . 9/26/2017 EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS SO AWESOME I'M SO HAPPY THIS IS REALLY ORIGINAL AND AAAAAA |
unfittingpuzzlepieces chapter 1 . 7/19/2017 The idea to this is cool :D That Cas had access to memories was a bit much though. Current thoughts would have been enough |
QuaggaTheMighty chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 Witches, man. This was amazing, adorable, awkward, and fucking beautiful all at once. I love it |
kataang0508 chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 I don't think I've ever laughed so hard in my life! Seriously, this story was brilliant. Who would ever think to separate the brain from the body? That's just evil, but for our purposes it was quite entertaining. I loved this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2016 Extremely funny, had me laughing the entire time. Simply awesome |
Maeyen chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Fucking hell! I fucking love this piece. I wish they would make it into an episode; I'd watch the shit out of it. I laughed and blushed. This is a really good work. |