It makes me immeasurably happy that there is an excellently written Merlin and Harry Potter xover that was updated within a week of me finding it, best of luck writing the next bit

Great chapter!

I have re-read this story so many times! And I loved this update, I can't wait to see Umbridge Vs Merlin!
Can't wait for your next update!

'Shnookums' XD

OMG this chapter was so cool!
I was so sad to see Remus' reaction, I hope he'll change his mind one day.
And you just found the most perfect name for Sirius I laughed so much XD
Basically, loved this update and how the story is evolving (awesome story by the way!) and lots of courage for your writing, you're doing an amazing job!

so I just followed you and really I don't mind the wait although this pandemic has made it awfully clear I do need to get out of my home to get distractedBUT BUT OMG THIS WAS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL! ahhh! can barely wait until Merlin starts with his sassy destroying attitude

I still love this story and I will continue to do so even after it's finished.

I have read many crossovers like this one, but yours is by far one of the best. Please update soon, this is amazing, plus you haven't updated in three months...

This is a fantastic story. I love it!

Lumos is the incantation; The spell is called the Wand-Lighting Charm, and would be taught in Charms class.

Good story so far, but you should have someone proofread it. I noticed several words that should be captialized weren't, and you used cart instead of carriage.

This has been an interesting story, and I've enjoyed every word of it. I hope you continue it. Thank you.

I’m going to be completely honest here. I think this story has a lot of potential, but the quality of writing PLUMMETED after the first chapter. Maybe you’re a first time writer or English isn’t your native language (which is totally fine btw). But I’m not sure what happened. I only got a few chapters in before I just couldn’t read it anymore and I was really disappointed. I can’t tell who is speaking because the paragraphs are not divided correctly. There is almost no punctuation in your dialogue which makes it very hard to understand. Maybe this improves further into your writing but there is no reason to have such a well written first chapter and let any semblance of editing (or care, to be brutally honest) to be completely disregarded in the chapters following. I really do wish you success with the fanfic but I sincerely hope you will consider editing these earlier chapters and look into getting a beta reader (assuming the lack of editing remains consistent throughout the rest of the story). Again, I think this has lots of potential and I hope you are successful.

One last thing: I appreciate all the sentimentality that you out into Merlin. However, there is no way all those designs could fit into the wand and still be clearly visible. It’s just too busy. And, even though Merlin really and truly misses his friends and family, he is emotionally mature enough to not cry or sob (or even almost cry or sob) every time he thinks of or is reminded of Camelot. You said it your self it has been well over a thousand years since Arthur died. There is absolutely no reason he hasn’t dealt with it by this time. Of course Merlin would still be sad, but those wounds have long since healed. He would have been through the grieving process for hundreds I years by this point so having Merlin nearly break down or have to choke back sobs, while sentimental and reminds the audience he has lost his family and friends, is really, really hard to believe. I have watched the series many, many times now be Merlin snaps back pretty quickly after a short grieving period. While I do want to see that he still misses them, it’s unrealistic to depict him this way. If someone really felt this way, in reality, they likely would have sever depression, be in a mental institution, and possibly be dealing with suicidal thoughts and tendencies, which, as you have depicted, Merlin is not.

One last time, I wish you success. There are a lot of things in your fic that I really enjoyed, but I really felt compelled to point these things out. I don’t mean any offense and I hope you don’t think that I do. I’m not trying to trash your writing or put it down in any way. Please feel free to disregard any of this if you so choose.

Omg I love this when will the next chapter come ?

It is very fantastic and interesting. Thanks you. Strongly the update.