i wanted her to be strong

I don’t think I can handle anymore of this fic, in the past 5 chapters I have read, i feel like I got 1/16 of the information and what’s going on. The paragraphs are run ons and far too long with all the dry information that is unnecessary and I don’t think I have ever skipped so much in a story ever. The concept was interesting and it had potential but the way you executed it was honestly horrible. I’m not trying to be offensive, I’m just trying to help you out in the future because it’s a major turnoff, the hook of the story wasn’t all that great and what’s with the forced relationship between her and Kakashi was so unnatural. It was so clearly forced and uncomfortable.

You need to shorten down the training sessions and just skip time when it comes to it with a summary after or before it. That or make it more interesting and less dry? I can’t stand anymore of this and you’d think after three weeks she’d get chakra threads. Her control is amazing and she learned to tree walk on the first try, you’d think she’d be able to do something like string theory within the first. And the plot is so unclear that I feel like there isn’t one at all.

All in all, I honestly can’t anymore with this fic. Maybe give it up for adoption or rewrite to where it’s less dry.
Again, not trying to hurt your feelings, but this is my honest opinion of this story and someone had to be blunt about it.

Damnnnn this was very good! I can tell your an intelligent person because of all the details and thought you put through when Sakura and the other shinobi are talking about analytics and stuff. I’ll be honest with you I didn’t understand half of what they were talking about lol like I read it but while I was reading it I was spacing out haha anyways this is super well written! It’s hard to find Fanfiction writers on here that can write stories so well and have super good grammar! I’m happy that you even decided to write this at all and bless our eyes with this amazing story! Anyways I hope you continue to update because I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter!

Your concept is really interesting. The airing of tactical information is really interesting and makes sense for ANBU.

I understand this has likely been shelved as it's been about four years, but regardless I'd just like to say I love this fic. It's so well written and I love the world-building. It also feels very realistic to the world they live in; this story is very good at not minimizing the real danger they face or the seriousness of it all. Plus, I love your Anko, and the depth you've put into the genjutsu, summoning, and chakra theory. It's just a really good story lol

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I’m eagerly awaiting the next update. Being able to read a story about Sakura where her own naturally talents are developed in a story where the political lay of the land explored without glassing over the nature of her profession is a true pleasure. Sakura’s relationships with other characters are realistic creating an exciting opportunity to read fan fiction in Naruto that frankly makes sense for once. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

this is too good

Hey, do you know when you might update this? :)

I liked the interaction with Ino :)

I'm surprised by this story - it's really good. I'm hoping Sakura will grow a logical sense of her smartiness and acknowledge that Sasuke is a traitor. She needs to take her job seriously otherwise she gonna get people killed by siding with that psychotic Uchiha.

please continue!

Finally some action

This Chapter flows as perfectly as the previous Chapters, & Sakura's progress as well as her setbacks throughout the story feels natural! *thumbs up, accompanied by a smirk*

YAY, character development! *smirks proudly*