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Wow, I loved it previously and I love it now. I like very much the way you developed the scenes, the facts and the character's perspectives.

I confess I did not remember that detail about Leon remembering the future.

Black Cat 557 and Wild Earth 007... Oh, those two...You are a genious xDD That was a lot of fun to read.

This is the first revised story I check in quiiiite some time, and I dear to say I feel more relieved: You kept the essential and changed what you desired to chance. Thank you for that.

I have always loved your dialogs and the way you handle the characters.

wow. I liked that you add kits on your revision although the original wasn't really that bad either.

you made me cry with the first chapter, but I'm a happy person now XD

Wow, I don't know how to start :)

I told you I found this story pretty interesting from the begining. I imagine it was difficult for you to get from chapter one to the end because it is very a rich subject and it could be developed in so many different ways and with so many details... I liked it very much.

I don't want to spoil anything but I have to say your idea about May and Yuri is brilliant. I confess I had never thought of them that way :O ... It works, yeah! Based on the anime, I always thought Ken was a healthy and balaced option for her, I still think so; but this idea of yours has its own potential.

Rosetta's power is amazing. I wonder if there are other stories (traditional legends, for example) where time is considered and element of nature. It's quite cool, to say the least :)

LOVE your writing I hope you are really happy with your gift.

A big hug for you.

please continue soon!

I love it, can't wait for the second part.

Poor sora can't wait for more

Hello, writer! :)

I'm sorry I didn't write this review sooner, but here I am.

I LOVE the way you manage to reinvent your narrative and those characters you have made yours incredibly well.

This subject is fascinating. Have you seen pictures of the Zao Kitsune Mura? It's an overdose of cuteness. I love the entire concept. This puts Sora in a new spot of mystery and sensuality, in a way she has not been before (perhaps), but you keep her cuteness and innocence along very well.

Leon (sexy bastard xD) , May and Rosetta are brilliantly crafted, as always.

I am very curious about who tried to kill Leon with the earthquake and why.

Be blessed, dear Shura Pirate.

Please update soon :)

Adorable, I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next part.

My my my! 333

I thought that Leon having a fiance was the case ever since he mentioned May. The drama, the suspense (the trauma but please DO go on because I live for short-ish torture of my favorite characters followed by OTP gratification eventually! ;D)!

As always, your writing is pure AWESOMENESS! Man, where do you even get your juice? TELL ME SO I CAN FEED THE MOTHER SOURCE AND YOU CAN WRITE FOREVER! *more 3333*

P.S: Second part is coming soon y/y? :O