Great story and very good well written.

So lovely, always.

Somehow i missed this one. My gosh its wonderful. So in character for where they were in that story arc. Great job.

His arms coil around her middle to keep her upright as she feels herself slipping further and further down the abyss where everything ceases to exist but him.

Awww happy sigh for all the hope!
Thanks

Oh man, this was so sweet! Personally I would have liked the ending to be even sweeter. ;) But this part was one of the most beautiful, heartfelt paragraphs I have ever read:
"She wants to wake up to the day breaking on her thighs, her head pillowed on the warmth radiating from his chest. She wants to skip this agonizing symphony of moments where they are stuck in a limbo: in love but not loving, together but so far apart."
Ugh, my heart. Thank you for this.

Loved it!

Very nice story. The ending was wrapped up but also leaving it open for extended this story or building another one off this one. Nicely done

Take my heart and do whatever you want with it, I'm so going down with this ship, OMG... This story is delicate when it comes to show the feelings. I love it *_*

What a lovely story!

You've done such a beautiful job. Wow your writing style is ace. Like omg loooove love looooooooooooove this.

I can't wait to read more by you omg great job :D

Very OK... Enjoyed this sweet story!

well done. very descriptive.

That was great. I thought you described the tension really well, I was basically holding by breath the entire time.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful little story with all of us : )

I really love this. Thanks for sharing it!