Reviews for The Fallen Messiah
Onishin Tsukitenshi chapter 18 . 7/24
If you're still on the site, please update this story soon.
Lord-Azrael3 chapter 18 . 6/5
This is a really great fic, can't wait for the next update!
Fullmetal11791 chapter 18 . 5/22
Shame you stopped writing this, its pretty well written and it's definitely enjoyable. Too many flashbacks though, even if theyre handled well.

And whats with good dxd stories getting abandoned in the middle of a rating game? Its like some sort of awful joke.
Asura chapter 8 . 4/25
To tell the truth, Kokabiel is right, the mythological and biblical factions steal the weapons that were given by God to protect humanity, and don’t give anything in return, if you ignore the part of the ridiculous comedy that only focuses on tits, you will see that this world is very dark indeed! Dark and cruel!
Kazragoth chapter 18 . 4/20
Well, I've read all this all the way to the end, and I gotta say.

I was right in sticking to this fan fiction ever since the start when Minato met with the Great Red, all the way to his awakening of his many legions of Personas.

I was initially confused on what made you go for Kokabiel's arc first before the Phenex game, but I had my gut tell me to just stick it for now. And I was glad I did. How you delivered the arc is exceptional and entertaining, along with how you smoothly did the transition with Sirzechs' breach into Minato's home (RIP Jormungand, by the way). The fact that Kokabiel had a change of heart is also a thumbs up in my book, and you don't even need the Meta-Nav for that! (Do you play Persona 5, by the way? It's a great game. Try the Royal Version!)

Another thing I liked are the comedic scenes, or at least what I deemed funny. Asia's slip under Asclepius' watchful eye, Zhuge Liang's whole chess debacle with the Sitris, Jormungand sending Sirzechs flying all the way to Hokkaido (again, RIP Jorm), and the dragon's thunderous stomp of annoyance over being called a virgin to name a few. I had a good round of laughs over that!

After this, I may give your newest fan fiction which was updated a while ago a spin. I may not know Danmachi, but I know Campione enough to get some gists of it. I do hope that you can continue this fanfic in your spare time, though. It's a heinous crime to just abandon it in a cliffhanger, and it would be a shame if this ends just like that. I know many would agree, and I dare say we'd give full support to you in continuing this. I bet my cards on that!
BuddhaBuddha chapter 7 . 3/25
I always love this rare scene some dxd fics have involving kokabiel. Always feels like it adds more depth to his character. Always boring to read through the arc when hes merely a psycho wanting war and loses pathetically.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/2
the funny thing about this whole chapter is that Asia asked the most important question in all of history. if Minato had the persona of God. the Personas' response was very ambiguous, but it was very clearly understood: if you have a persona of god, he will follow you. in short, if you have that persona, you are also god. as we see in the following chapters, Minato is all of his personas and the personas are a part of Minato. it means that if he has god, he is god. that must have been what Kokabiel realized when Minato showed his Personas. the funny thing is that Xenovia asks Minato to create a religion in the following chapters, and during this conversation he ends up remembering that he is the messiah, who is part of the holy trinity, which is the human side of god. the holy spirit, the son and the father. being that the son is actually god in human form with both divine and human aspects what Minato is, since he is his true persona. in fact I don't know if he realized that he is basically god, but he is probably close, when he realizes he will hit himself so hard. not to mention that there are suspicions in the most recent chapter of this story that Minato may be suffering from the disease that is affecting all biblical gods in Megami Tensei's multiverse. the only difference is that Minato manages to stay healthy because he has his Personas to guide him and help him overcome this disease and the other biblical gods only have himself, which ends up making them all go crazy. pity that this story will not be continued any longer. but it had so much potential.
nim istar chapter 18 . 2/28
great story, dont expect to see this updated again but for what it is it was nice.
Uday Sra chapter 18 . 2/28
Awesome. please update
Guest chapter 17 . 2/20
Video : God - BibleProject(YouTube)
Guest chapter 12 . 1/16
Not to mention that this part I spent below basically Minato declares himself to be the creator and father of all his Personas, summing up to the archangels Minato has, Minato is his father and god, since he created them all. Now a story that would be nice to see, Minato goes to DxD and his Personas gain sentience, the first thing his angelic Personas do is to call him Daddy. It would be a new way of looking at the relationship of Minato and his Personas, with him having to deal with the fact that he is the father of countless supernatural beings created through fragments of his soul. it would basically be Ainz's relationship with Nazarick's NPCs, with the added bonus being that all NPCs would be Ainz's creations and would treat him as their creator or father depending on personality.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/16
As Kokabiel returned to the ground, he shook his head. "They are materializations of thought. Manifestations of the soul. Fractures of the human psyche. Personas."

Kokabiel gawked at him. "You mean… you've created life from nothing but your own soul?"

He felt a little uncomfortable. Kokabiel was looking at him the same way Raynare had. Was his power really that extraordinary in this world? He did not remember being so taken away and befuddled when he first learnt of Personas.

Slowly, he nodded. Kokabiel was not wrong.

"That's something only a god can do."

He was going to refute that claim, but his Personas had other ideas. The same deep voice as before rang out.

"He is more than that, Fallen."
an extra part that adds more content to my comment and also gives more proof that Minato is basically god.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/16
"It wasn't supposed to turn out this way. Archangels were God's will. That was what Xenovia had learnt very early on in her religious studies. They were an extension of Him, and no one could defy God's will."
and
"They looked at Uriel expectantly. Minato felt sorry for the Archangel, even if the Persona was an extension of his own will. He would have hated being in that position. With flecks of porcelain still chipping from his face, Uriel could only shake his head sadly."

honestly, it makes sense why Kokabiel declares Minato the new shepherd of humanity. basically, Minato is the second coming of God and his angels. whereas archangels are their creations and the extent of their will as stated in this chapter. Minato is god, they are shaking because it is the same as Kokabiel saying Minato died. I wonder how long it will take Minato to realize that his angels see him as his heavenly father and in a sense they are totally right, since the messiah is said to be the biblical god in human form for Christians. the final and true persona of Minato is the messiah, literally he personifies it, he is god on his most merciful and savior side, without considering that he won the card of the universe, something no one else has achieved to this day. good chapter and hope that one day you continue this story!
Vilostrike218 chapter 18 . 1/15
Please let there be another chapter! This is so GOOD!
Bryan Of Grimm chapter 8 . 12/29/2019
This Kokabiel reminds me of the one from "A Demon Lord's Herogreat story, a shame that the author suddenly stopped updating)
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