Reviews for Saudade
Black Swords Man32 chapter 9 . 2/9
Please let us know if this has been abaorned or not.
Stillnyte chapter 9 . 11/21/2018
Too bad this hasn't been updated in over 2 years. This was a really enjoyable story and I loved the new pacifist child, Shiloh.

Really wish this fic was completed. But, I'm sure the author has their reasons for abandoning it.
Pacifist Dragon chapter 9 . 7/21/2017
Please say you are coming back
Applz chapter 9 . 6/26/2017
Yo have you abandoned this fanfic? You haven't updated in over a year!
Dragonna chapter 4 . 12/3/2016
Tere are something that I don't understand. Sans remembers genocide timelines right? But Frisk doesn't think and act like if she/he has done a genocide run, or FEW. Frisk acts only like if she/he had done a neutral-pacifist where she/he had been forced to kill Asgore. If the kid had kill a lot in previous timeline, it wouldn't fell so horrible to have kill one monster (Asgore), right?
I don't understand oo
Also I don't know why but I don't trust Shiloh. Too nice (I mean it's easy to do a pacifist when nobody try to kill you right?), too forgiving...I feel a cruel twist.
Poor Papyrus, sound like he has never forget Frisk (and like the kid a lot, maybe more that Shiloh), he must have been so scared by Frisk's state T_T
DarkRubberNeck chapter 9 . 11/19/2016
I swear every time I see I swear every time I see Shiloh I keep thinking that she is secretly Chara. I feel like on Frisks very first run Chara took advantage of Frisk and since then over every run she slowly but surely took a pieces of "Frisk" every run till Frisk was left as an empty husk feeling nothin but pain and torture. Wow writing this theory down makes it feel even worse then it was in my head
DbzMaster77 chapter 8 . 7/2/2016
Please disregard my previous message about the plot hole. I re-read the story and saw that there was no plot hole at all. I do have to wonder though why did Flowey not have enough time to get the souls? I mean they were right in front of Asgore through the whole battle.
Starbreaker54 chapter 9 . 6/30/2016
This story is so good I can't/can wait for another chapter! And by that I mean I don't want to wait for another chapter but i know that the longer it takes the better or more the chapter is so while i wait I will reread this story for the 19 time maybe? i don't know, and i don't care. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2016
You know what? I thought it over and realized what I said before was childish of me. I'm sorry for that outburst, and Shiloh... she may have her flaws but they're one of the better OC's I've seen on this site.
If you can, maybe you should delete my previous review, and this one too. I don't want to litter your inbox with pointless chit-chat. Good luck on completing this story of yours.

For added effect I'll say it again, I'm sorry.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2016
I am not sorry I am about to say this. I HATE SHILOH! I mean I don't really like Shiloh one bit. I don't honestly care about it at all. Still I don't believe in Shiloh at all, she should be burning in HELL. Shiloh is just to kind for her own good and she is like Papyrus who I hate the most. In any Fanfiction I have red the character I hate the most is Shiloh. I honestly don't know how anyone could like it at all. I would rather have Chara have a bigger part in this than have Shiloh in the story at all. Plus I hate how it calls Toriel 'Mom' that is only for Asriel, and Chara to use. Did Shiloh even meet Asriel at all because I don't think she could have been able to, What about Chara I don't think so either because they are with Frisk. So I hate Shiloh I don't care if you like her I wish that Frisk would just RESET the TIMELINE so we don't have to see hit anymore. I will say it again and again I HATE SHILOH!
Jewlery box chapter 8 . 5/24/2016
Thank you for answering me questions! And being so nice about it I know some people will answer the question rudely, but you didn't ) I can't wait for the rest of the story to come out! Once again thank you for answering my questions.
DbzMaster77 chapter 9 . 5/18/2016
Keep up the good work this story is really getting good. I can't wait to see how Frisk will react to some of the other monsters. keep this story going it would be a waste to let it die. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Also in one of the chapters it says that Shiloh freed the monsters with the help of the human souls, but how would that work? Frisk killed Asgore so Flowey should have taken the souls. How did Flowey lose the souls? Or is it a plot hole I found? I just wanted to point it out it looks like a glaring problem with the story.
DescendingSnow chapter 9 . 5/4/2016
Now, it's picking up. Hehe, I'll stand by to see what happens from now on.
The Emerald Queen 88 chapter 9 . 5/4/2016
Shiloh seems pretty cool from what we've seen of her so far. I'm curious about her backstory, and how she ended up climbing the mountain. I just wanna hug Frisk so badly right now! Anyways, great chapter.
S.R.457 chapter 8 . 5/1/2016
GOD this is sad. love it! update plz!
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