I have decided to skip chapters 5-9 based on personal reasons. Mainly bc all of your chapter notes at the top said "all fluff", which frankly, I think you shoulda just put in your summary of the story. It woulda cautioned me away.

I'm sorry. I'm not trying to be negative, but I think it's clear that I don't really like fluff. I do wish you woulda put that in the summary bc that's not what I came for. You've got a nice, simple writing style. I just don't think this story is for me lol. I am curious though now that I know it's all fluff as to how you made it to 192k words. I commend you on thinking of that much fluffy content bc I woulda run out of the sweetness a loooong time ago.

I just. I don't know what to think. You had her lose her ENTIRE memory... and then you just gave it back! You didn't even tease her! You were holding a golden egg, and you decided to drop it on the ground. You had set up a perfectly nice start to what could have had so many better endings... and you chose this. I cannot believe. No belief! Consider me a unbeliever.

I will pretend that this is the end of the story. The next chapter is the beginning of a new story. Might as well be since this is the end of the little plot that you started. To think, I thought you were about to kick it up a notch.

oh thank god. a cliffhanger at the end is actually the best thing so far. I was about to write a review on how this is a terrible story but that I was gonna continue reading because i'm astounded at the amount of motivation you had to write. It's crazy to me. I don't think the story is actually terrible, it's just terribly uninteresting so far. Yeah the avengers have a soulmate... but there is no plot. So far it is just alternate universe and it was kinda driving me cray cray. I don't think the characters are matching up with their character selves very much (mainly Thor, Tony, Steve, and Natasha there) and that was kinda driving me mad. And a lot of things I just don't see as "realistic". Like... all six standing across the street from her waving? Everybody being happy and perfect and everything? No doubts or bad feelings? UGh

I'm looking forward to the cliffhanger in the next chapter and hopefully I can write a nicer review haha. Much love, EG

BuCkY

And I'm rereading this again.

Whoopie doooooo

I India feel said now I was hoping that she would have chosen Bruce

good god. after such a binge my emotions are all over the place
but i adore this thank you

NOOOOOO! It’s over? I loved reading this so much!

OMFG! Illuminati! LOVE THAT SO MUCH!

LOVE all the references!

OH MY GOSH! WHY DO YOU KEEP DOING THAT?! I am so glad that you havare more now, I don't think I could wait. I think that I could possibly quite literally die of that was the case. Oh my gosh. I'm stilll jot breathing correctly. Why. I hate you so much right now, not really but I do. Oh my gosh. I just, I hate you. Okay. I'm calmer now. Why. Why did you do that. I think that you, I don't know would like, die soon if you left it off there. Ugh. Thank you, I guess? Good job on having good characters? I don't know. Smiles?

I don't know weather I'm laughing or crying. I'm crying for sure nut I can't tell what it is causing my breathing. Thank you.

I absolutely love this story! I've read it many times and just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading it each and every time! I hope you never take it down or leave this site because I won't know what to do! :-)

very nice

Nice Star Trek: TNG reference.