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nzjojo chapter 13 . 8/3 Wow! I loved reading every word. What a wonderful story you have weaved with a strong Bella and an Edward to fall in love with (faults and all). Thank you so much for sharing it with us all :) |
twiclare chapter 13 . 7/20 I’m glad that they made it back together again. Great story! |
hikingurl chapter 13 . 7/20 Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing it. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 11 . 3/11/2019 Are these characters really in their 30's? Edward and Bella stay friends for almost two years and only move forward when they have a very childish chat of her turning down a date? And apparently she had two dates while friends with Edward? I mean come on, where's the attraction and pull? You write Bella only being attracted to Edward when he putting a baby to sleep, which really doesn't count... Ever since they re met, you hadn't had her be at all attracted to Edward... you didn't write it in... So are just to assume she still likes him as much as she did when she was younger even tho we don't see it? |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 10 . 3/11/2019 I'm so over this... So Edward hasn't been with anyone? And still loves Bella whole, even when he was a coke head. YET, Bella gets married, not to mention moved on within a year of leaving Edward. And we're suppose to believe she loved Edward this whole time? SHE left him. She had the right too, but still she left him. Let's not forget that. I hate main characters that given no weight to throw in the situation created by the author... It makes dull and predictable. |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 13 . 1/25/2019 This was pretty perfect! Thanks for sharing! xox |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 12 . 1/24/2019 I kinda love your way of getting cheesy with us..hehe.. ...and the breathing him in and exhaling the past. . Great chapter! xox |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 11 . 1/24/2019 Gurl! I love your sense of humor and the way you write it down! Hilarious! You make my day today! xoxo |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 8 . 1/24/2019 Yes...I think she's ok and he deserves a chance at picking up lose ends..either way. Closure or a new beginning. The what-if's would hunt you down, if she didn't go for it |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 6 . 1/24/2019 Co-dependency is a bitch. The worst. I'm glad she saw the light and left. She cannot help him...only herself. |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 5 . 1/24/2019 It's so stressful to read this...addiction is the devil.. I know how she felt... |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 4 . 1/24/2019 .ful. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 3 . 1/24/2019 ! |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 2 . 1/24/2019 ...so...good...! |
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 1/23/2019 Wow, girl! I found this by total accident and I'm so glad I did! I had no idea you wrote - much less I had any idea you did it so well! You have great way with words. I fluv it! Xox |