This is really good ..

Evilness!xD Oh welcome back btw

Idk and btw I read the original one... if ya know what I mean xD

Youch! Crowstrike is a bad sport xD
You're a good writer... I'd have to think for awhile to point out the exact pros and cons...

You NEED to continue this series
It is awesome

well, I kind of feel bad for Crowpaw, but I don't really think it will do any good for them to be together with their disability. Owlfeather would be a better option, unless we get some more Crow x bramble moment.

Hmm... Good question? I honestly don't know xD

Very nice story... my favorite character is probably either Bramblepaw or Crowpaw...

Omigosh its awesome Brook!