overall I like your story and keep reading it. I like Malone having saved Veronica by 'sacrificing'himself. I do think he's a great character and would have done that for any of his friends. he has come to Marguerite' s aid several times, even though she's been a bully to him. Remember the episode Salvation for a great example. She went through his things, tried to destroy his journals and was downright ugly to him but as soon as she needed help, he did jump in. He did the same in Prophecy, risking himself to help Marguerite and Roxton.
But I want to comment on your referring to Malone as a 'boy'. He was young, yes, but about 25-30. Just a very late comment to the story.

I liked this story overall. It showed Ned as a hero saving Veronica at the risk of himself. I agree with Roxton that the Boss and his cohorts all should have had a long slow painful death for hurting my Neddy. But I like how the explorers all rallied to help Ned in his recovery. Overall, a very well done story.

this was a great story. I''ve been catching up on the show thanks to YouTube and I really miss these characters, Malone being my favorite. yeah, the dinosaurs were cheesy, but the show wasn't bad. and now I'm catching up on the stories as well. glad they''re still here n this was one of the better ones. I think you had the characters personalities done very well.

I read this story some time ago and luved it and I have just reread it and I luv it even more. Ned and Veronica fics are great. You are great at getting the character personalities. Hope you don't stop writing Lost World fics here. _

hey hi!

sorry this review is a tad bit later..but i just discovered e story...n thought i'll leave a review as an appreciation for a great story.

everything flows really well...e emotions were potrayed perfectly n u showed a pretty good display of reactions according to their characters(u know wat i mean...).

anyway...i've always appreciated a good angst/torture/hurt kind of fict n i guess urs certainly qualified as one...we r all sadists,rite?

excellent plot..there's more to come,rite?

hope this finds u in gd health;

aniki19

Hey! I really liked this fic. I espcally like n/v ones they're just so interesting. I plot was very good kept me at the edge of my seat. Overall GREAT STORY

I really like this story, there are so few here about Veronica and Ned! And those are the ones I enjoy the most.

I loved the story!

A bit sad but great

I absolutely loved the ending (the supposed epilogue)! It was hilarious! Made me laugh and then kept me smiling for ages.

Loved the story.

Hope you write more lie it.

I'll keep a lookout!

If I said that it still wasn't enough for an ending, would you write another chapter? :) Just kidding. This was really cute. Keep writing!

hmm.. this was a lovely surprise!

I loved it but I still want more :) hehe...

anyway, good job!

Spinnd, I have to say, I loved this story from start to finish! I am a total N/V shipper, and you made my day by creating such a wonderful ending. Please keep writing, you are an awesome author.

Good ending to a good story.

I'm very glad that Ned recovered (or, is recovering). Keep up the writing!

Your story had a very anticlimactic ending, it wasn't very good

i'd hardly call something this short lumping anything together

Phenominal story. It brought tears to my eyes. Any plans for a sequel/epilogue where Ned and Veronica discuss their feelings for one another?

;-)