Can't wait for more, and I want to see what Hari does to Oro-teme and the other Akatsuki idiots. I also want to see Kakashi and Hari finally get together, maybe Naruto and Sasuke too. The Anko and Luna/Runa pairing was a twist, but cute.

C'est tellement génial ! Est-ce qu'il y aura une suite un jour ?

I will admit, not being a fan of slash, I was worried that it might "ruin" part of the story for me, but given how you've handled everything else thus far, I'm confident I can live with it. Worst comes to worst I can skip tiny parts, which only hurts me in the long run.

tl;dr, I'm enjoying the fic despite my initial worry about the pairing. Thanks for sharing this with us. I'll keep reading.

I apologize for this rant but...ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
idk where this bullshit came from. BUT YOU DO NOT NEED A BABY FOR JINCHUURIKI's that's bullshit. the first modern day jinchuuriki was mito WHO WAS A FULLY GROWN WOMAN. children are malleable and get the best results when made into one yes such as much larger personal chakra reserves than an adult would get. children are also more preferable in the fact that it allows the bijuu to influence them even more in the way of elemental chakra meaning the jinchuuriki can more readily use the abilities gifted by being one without it contradicting an already pre-existing style of combat. but BABIES ARE NOT NEEDED. Mito most likely only trusted another clansman who would be trained in fuinjutsu to contain the kyuubi, Kushina being chosen specifically because of her Kongo Fusa. Minato only used Naruto because he didn't believe he should force the burden on another if he could not ask for his own child to bear the burden. That and Minato was giving Naruto a tool or a weapon of great power at his disposal in doing so. AGAIN BABIES ARE NOT NEEDED holy crap. The only two ACTUAL babies were gaara and naruto and gaara wasn't even born when he had the ichibi sealed into him, no clue how they managed to do that but they did. All others were at least 7 years of age or older when they had one sealed into them. with bee being a fresh genin from my understanding. I have no idea how this thought came about but by the time you started writing this all the information was known and no speculation was needed.

Elsa

Hari should be a tiger

just a little bit of suggestion, you probably already know this but non verbal casting is generally touched upon is 6th year at Hogwarts. its especially important when you consider the "professional dueling scene" in wizarding society. professor flitwick himself was a premier duelist before hunkering down to teach. basically, in the context of a duel, not shouting out the name of the spell your about to use makes it that much harder for your opponent to decide wether or not to use the basic protego shield charm or the appropriate counter charm for the particular spell used. protego can only take a wizard so far. all just thoughts I had about the mention of Hari surpassing voldywarts in magical knowledge. I think I ever recall a moment in hp(other then when voldy is a sickly baby) using the verbal incantation.

yo, to whomever is giving you and reviews Fem. this story is long as heck and the thought going into it is obvious. I may not appreciate the overpowering awesome of Hari, BUT it's a great story so far and I'm enjoying myself. it's people like you that take the time to write such fantastic ideas that spark creativity in my own mind. thank you, please keep writing tho we will never meet, you have joined my personal favorite list of authors on fanfiction of course the number one spot is 'Harry Potter and the methods of rationality' because that book is just a literal work of art at like 680,000 words.

that moment you think you mistakenly started reading an hp avatar fic

Interesting.

Por favor actualiza esta historia se que no es una obligación pero porfavor

I just re-read thiswhole thing. Will you be continuing this, or was it abandoned? I really like it and want to see Hari and Kakashi finally get together!

I know this fic is old so you might not read this review, but I'll leave it anyway. This is an interesting start, and I'll definitely continue on to the next chapter, but there was one thing I wanted to point out that's a bit of a pet peeve of mine. Any time someone writes a story that features a MOD!Harry, or really any version of Harry that is out of school and on to adulthood, it feels really out of place that he, (or she, in this case) speaks her spells aloud to do magic. You say that Hari was over sixty years old, and silent casting is a skill that Hermione masters half way through year six in canon(I'm pretty sure Harry eventually gets it down too, but I'm not sure so I'm using Hermione as my example). So you can kinda understand why it feels out of place that someone who is MOD with five decades of magical experience would still have to use verbal incantations.

Like I said, the story is good so far, and I'll def keep reading, but this is a detail that always stands out to me in stories like this.

SPN? What is that. It was mentioned in chapter 3.

Love it and still hoping to get an update!