| Reviews for Fifty Shades of a Pretty Woman |
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  PleasingJenny chapter 2 . 2/27 Wow best book start ! I didn't see that coming ! |
 Pleasingjennifer chapter 4 . 2/28 Well done on the whole story and the end ! Every one will die and that was a nice ending in the end . This story is a keeper and i am happy. This story has a lot of twists and turns and they are all wonderful ... |
| Fifty Shades Girl chapter 4 . 11/18/2019 Such a beautiful story, i loved it! |
| pepe71 chapter 4 . 11/17/2019 WOW! just WOW! I cannot believe how HARD I cried, reading Christian's thoughts on Ella's journal! The contents of the journal - all about him 3 Naming their second daughter after Ella 3 Ella writing grace with a capital G 3 Him talking about growing up with the grandkids around at that house too 3 Christian and Anastasia dying together 3 This was one of my most FAVOURITE short stories in the Fifty Shades Fan Fic collection! You truly outdid yourself! Thank you so much for writing it, and for sharing it! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVED it! You've set the bar high now, so I cannot WAIT to read more of your stories xo |
| pepe71 chapter 3 . 11/17/2019 Yep! Another great chapter... BUT there's one HUGE problem... next chapter is meant to be the last one... but I don't want this story to END! |
| pepe71 chapter 2 . 11/17/2019 HOLY FUCKBALLS! And then you do THAT! OH MY GOD! She knew who Ella was! And that diary! What a BRILLIANT idea! This just keeps getting better and better! |
| pepe71 chapter 1 . 11/17/2019 HOLY SHIT! This is amazing! HOW freaky that Ana has a child... living in the the exact same apartment as Christian did, as a child... WOW! What a GREAT story so far! I LOVE it! Can't wait to read on... |
| limtse1978 chapter 4 . 6/9/2019 For only being 4 chapters in length, the author really packed it full of emotion and love... this is the first story I have read on fan fiction where Christian really forgave his bio mom... such a heartwarming and captivating story... thank you so much |
| SMEADE chapter 4 . 5/26/2019 You really know how to put together a very emotional story. Christian finding Ana the way he did, helping her get a job, giving her an apartment so her and her son could live safely was great. Falling in love with them was extra, made him a better man. Ella’s journal only talked about what she hoped for her son “I hope Christian can live in the world of love, beauty and Grace.” Did Ella predict that for Christian, if you believe in faith only a mother’s love can make it come true. Another great read had tears reading this story. |
| SMEADE chapter 3 . 5/26/2019 Christian has a date that’s a first he’s never been on a date before. Where is he going to take Ana and her son. |
| SMEADE chapter 2 . 5/26/2019 What does the journal say that Ana found in Ella’s old apartment. I hope it has a mother’s thoughts on how sorry she is on how both her and son are living. |
| SMEADE chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 Ana has a child and pimp that’s totally going down a different road. Curious to read how and where you take both Christian and Ana with a child. |
| dogtracker55 chapter 4 . 2/6/2019 Great story and I agree with others that it would have been lovely to be longer. Thank you xx |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/13/2018 MY, MY! You have taken my breath away... A really sweet story that covers the ground in a beautiful way. Thanks for sharing! Denie' |
| MartyHowe chapter 4 . 10/31/2018 Great short story. I love reading other peoples adaptations, and I love your version. I think the short story length was perfect, you left us wanting more, so now it’s onto another of your stories! Thank you for writing! |
