Reviews for When Time Periods Collide!
Man of cartoons chapter 10 . 5/4
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Oh? You're still here? Okay, I guess I can what is on my mind.

I will start with what I didn't like. It is minor, but I will just say it.

It struck me a little how 2001 Wanda and 2001 Cosmo seem to disregard Poof. I would've thought that their parental instincts would want to add him in what they were trying to do after getting rid of their future selves. That's just one thing I want to say.

Everything else was pretty good. I should've read this fanfiction sooner, but I had a LOT on my plate at the time. I kind of like how things went for both past and the future. On one side I was supporting the past versions, and on the other side I was supporting the future version. You really have me a lot to feel. Lol

Honestly, I'm not really a big fan of Timmy X Chloe. I have read some of the fans with that pairing, but overall I would still prefer Tootie any day. Now that is a girl who needed character development.

Anyway, the message you had with future Timmy was touching. You made a lot of good points about liking the past and how the future turnouts. My only advice is that if you're going to go with something like that again, you should try to get to the point directly. I kind of felt like you were trying to do it, but then you added a few other good points which ended up being a little wordy. Just my opinion.

Overall the fanfiction was wholesome. Some part of it would've made for a finale of Butch Hartman had the balls for it. I can only see this as imperfect since pairing Chloe with Timmy would just be a dumpster fire amongst the FOP community.

About Jorgen, I do like how his character changed in the show. I was surprised at the time when he became less of an antagonist to Timmy, and more of a guy who has...personality. Old Jorgen was boring in my opinion. He was basically a one-on-one character. But new Jorgen has shown that he is strict, understanding, and funny. His character was better than whatever the past one could do.

So that's all I have to say. Keep polishing your writing skills. You have a gift. Bye.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 10 . 3/22
This was a pretty good ending. Nice job.

Keep the good writing.
oscuro oscuro chapter 10 . 3/22
Tu fanfic estuvo increíble lo disfruté de principio a final es un buen sierre a la discusión constante de que el programa ya no es lo mismo que fué o y podrías continuar con el fanfic amor anestésico en la que Timmy con trae amnesia y se enamora de Chloe ase mucho que espero su continuación
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 9 . 3/20
Great one here, and good references to Scooby Doo.

Keep the good writing.
oscuro oscuro chapter 9 . 3/20
Sube el siguiente capítulo tu historia es increíble ya que representas a ambas versiones de los padrinos mágicos y la postura de los fans del programa y sus opiniones de que el programa ya no es bueno y a los que todavía les gusta el programa, actualmente por favor actualiza pronto la emoción me está matando
Themakers12 chapter 9 . 3/20
Good chapter!
Can't wait for the final chapter! :D
In the words of Grif from Red vs Blue at the end of the chapter: "This is not going to be good"
Laquane2020 chapter 9 . 3/20
can you please update the last final Chapter tonight please?
Laquane2020 chapter 8 . 3/19
dude this is getting good! Please continue! Can you also do one where 2011 Jake and the Neverland pirates meets their 2016 counterpart?
oscuro oscuro chapter 8 . 3/15
Podrías subir el siguiente capítulo pronto el suspenso me está matando
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 8 . 3/12
Whoa, what a cliffhanger.

Keep the good writing.
Man of cartoons chapter 7 . 3/3
I'll be really honest with you! I'm really enjoying this fanfic! It's given me some ideas for my next video on YouTube! Heck, if my editing skills improve, I might actually make this into some kind of video too (with your permission, of course)!

Anyway, you made some good points even former fans of the show would notice if they saw the last few seasons. Barely any of the villains from the early seasons were used, Timmy never seemed to learn any lesson, his friends are just obsolete, Cosmo and Timmy's dad have gotten dumber, and...well there's just so many things wrong. Ready for a rant?

I used to be subscribed to Butch Hartman, but there was some things that really angered me about him (besides that one thing he tried to launch but ended up being a scandal of its own). His excuse for not using other characters was because apparently Mr. Crocker and Timmy's dad were the best to use or some bullshit reason like that. But all I can think of is "What?" "Where the fuck did he get the idea that Fairly Odd Parents didn't have interesting characters besides those two?" They overused Crocker and Timmy's dad so much that the humor in them was so predictable and obnoxious. And let's not forget that even favorite villains like Vicky, the bully, etc were tossed out because of that dumbass reason. Honestly, I'm glad Butch Hartman never thought of shows like Ben 10 and others. In one video he made, he said he wish he came up with that show and other fantasy characters.

I can't help but shudder at the horror he would've done. At least Ben 10 knew when to change things up, at least it knew when to bring in old characters and stay faithful to its original concept. Yes, I know the franchise isn't as long as Fairly Odd Parents, but then again it's way better than what Butch Hartman did with his own show. He completely disregarded Fairly Odd Parents' vast array of characters because he was feeling fatigue. Maybe he should've just handed over the reins to someone else (kind of like with Spongebob), that way someone can add more to the cartoon.

But we will never get that. Butch Hartman screwed up because he narrowed his mind too much on few characters he thought the audience liked, but in reality got tired of due to their overuse.

I know Chloe is the last nail that killed the show, but I do think her character could've been better than "sharing Timmy's fairies". Maybe if Butch had more of a backbone like Simpsons' creator, then he would've talked it out with the executives to craft Chloe into a more polished character.

I plan on making a video that would explore making Chloe a much better character, and how she could've fixed the series as a whole.

Anyway, sorry for the long rant. I probably made some grammatical errors. Lol

Keep up the good work.
Themakers12 chapter 7 . 2/28
OH MY GOSH! LOL
This is hilarious... and true! Even timmy's mom doesn't get a appearance in 2016.
I can't wait for this concept to happen again in powerpuff girls, spongebob, mlp (g4), rugrats or ed edd n eddy
Can't wait for the legal wars! XD
Michael78 chapter 7 . 2/28
Well this became Meta and would be an interesting storyline if the series used it
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 2/27
Yep, it was just a matter of time before the Fairy Court got involved.

Keep the good writing.
Laquane2020 chapter 7 . 2/27
hey what's up buddy it's me! I'm a loving the so far can you please please update this next chapter tonight so I can read it please oh and also can you add you can come to me by Laura marano and Ross Lynch, so, Chloe can listen to it to help her calm down while the 2001-2016 Timmy Turner are in Fairy Court!? Thanks!
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