Reviews for Egoísmo
DAngel7 chapter 12 . 8/20/2019
I feel very sad because in your note at the end of the chapter you mention you'll update soon but that has been like a year ago!
I really want go see wya4 will happen next. I hope you'll find inspiration to write more.
DAngel7 chapter 11 . 8/20/2019
Ah, you're making Matsuri's character beyond manipulative and evil.. to go so far in her deception! I wonder what will Gaara do.. Hinata also has his son, and he left her alone even though he loves her so why not leave Matsuri? I hope he doesn't come up with the excuse of being a proper man because then I would really stop rooting for him go be happy and get Hinata but I will root for Hinata to move on.
DAngel7 chapter 10 . 8/20/2019
I understand Gaara, but I also justify Hinata's actions. Your writing is really good!
DAngel7 chapter 9 . 8/20/2019
Alcohol is Gaara's biggest enemy, hasn't he learned his lesson already?! I also blame Kankuro! Now Matsuri is gonna say she's pregnant ... what are you gonna do Gaara? I'm so mad at him, he's screwing everything up again! Agh!
Can't wait to see what will happen next..
DAngel7 chapter 8 . 8/20/2019
I know it mayve unrealistic but I was hoping that they will find a heart for Hiashi. So sad!
Oh, and that is Matsuri's character - selfish and jealous, can't accept that another two people are happily in love!?
DAngel7 chapter 7 . 8/20/2019
What will Gaara do.. he better prepare divorce papers before he starts begging Hinata for a second chance!
DAngel7 chapter 6 . 8/20/2019
Ah, a cliffhanger! You sure know how to make your readers crazy for more!
DAngel7 chapter 5 . 8/20/2019
This is probably the very few times I've seen Hiashi portrayed as a very understanding and loving father - I really like it!
DAngel7 chapter 4 . 8/20/2019
You do add some interesting twists- like what is Matsuri's hidden motive for revenge, and is Gaara once again going to listen to his father's absurd demands! I thought he would of grown as a man who can achieve things on his own not bow down to others for money!
I can't stop reading!
DAngel7 chapter 3 . 8/20/2019
I like the development.. it's very natural and it moves the story forward. I am slightly dissapointed about making Matsuri into a bad vain character simply for the reason of having us to root for Gaara and Hinata. I think it would of been better if she was closer to her original character by being optimistic and good but still Gaara coudn't fall for her.
The ending had me curious- what would be Toneri's role in this story. Fake husband? (I hope)
DAngel7 chapter 2 . 8/20/2019
Gaara's father is one piece of s***
I can't believe Gaara will still follow through with the marriage, I was glad to see him stand up to his father but in the end.. I'm dissapointed in him. I really wish to see Hinata acting cold towards him next time they meet!
DAngel7 chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
I like the setting of the story.. good first chapter, it gets me interested in how things will develop
Guest chapter 12 . 5/16/2019
va a ver porfis continua esta bueno el trama
layill chapter 12 . 4/16/2019
En 2019 y aun espero la continuacion, un fic tan extraordinario merece continuar y no ser abandonado como muchos otros :( ojala tenga la dicha de volver a leer continuaciones de este que me tiene enamorada
atziritfrias chapter 12 . 2/25/2019
Hola, es la primera vez que leo uno de tus fics y realmente me cautivó está Historia. Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo.
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