I love! I'm not for SakuOro personally, but I can deal with it.

Should she really be explaining those? The history? The language in which the future is written by her? And I still stand for obirin ah!

So little of obi. WHY IS THERE SO LITTLE OBITO MOMEMTS!? More obirin author-san. Obi/rin pairing, please.

Uh, rin and obito were childhood friends, like since before the acadamy. And was kashi three years younger? prodigy.

Is that really an inner? Not the real rin?

She seemed like a dimwitt. Even when the facts slammed into her face she's thinking up alternatives. Maybe she never read a fanfic? She's tolerable, because she's in naruto, i dn't think she can adapt with the cruelity that comes with the ninja life, we have to see. Though I would have found more likable in real life. She accepts the present for what it is, dn't know if that's a good thing(will die, really, does she have no hope for changing the canon? Well its still the 1st chap, maybe she would have a change of mindset soon) And I like everyone in team 7, buut I love obito.

Loool Miss Author please don’t read and just ignore what ‘Guest’ posted below - not even worth a second of your time. Honestly, everything they’re saying is idiotic and I don’t know why they even reviewed. Why read the story if it doesn’t fit your fantasies that you’re oh so hung over on ‘guest’? Ha! Hilarious I swear. Just go write your own fanfic- I might even read it! ;D

Anywhos, I love love your version of Rin. She’s adorable and is so genuine it brings big fat smile on my face. Please pleassssseeeeee make it a happy ending uwu. I want to see all of them happy ah ;-; but I guess even a bad ending is alright haha. Ahhh not sure about Sakumo and Orochimaru- maybe friends who share their sufferings? Deffo want to make Oros team regret abandoning him tho lol.
Thank you for this amazing story Miss Author! The side stories were absolutely wonderful as well xx

Thanks~

that little tid bit at the end is shattering my heart and im sobbing and nothing is ok

This is amazing and I can't believe you stopped! I love how she's changing everything and I can't stop loving every piece of this. Merlin, I love this; and the badass kunoichi (aka Mikoto & Kushina), the lovable teammates (Obito and Kakashi), the glorious teachers (Oro-chan-san, Minato, Kishimoto, and others) and lost heroes (mainly Sakumo but also everyone else because at some point, everyone in Canon seems to take it literally- Orochimaru, Kakashi, and Obito, to name a few- or everyone else seems to forget- idiotic villagers-). Thank you for the fluff and cute chapters and lovable comments (still snickering about Rins use of being younger and making older men feel like perverts and pedophiles lol HAHAHAHA)(That chapter in the other POV fic where Danzo was accused of being a pedophile and all the ROOT Ambu just stood there feeling awkward gotta be one of the best scenes out there!) Anyway hope you haven't abandoned this wonderful story! Even though its been years (why you stopped I will never understand because this is AMAZING) I hope you will continue!
Stay happy and healthy!

-Ainsley

Wow. Rin is extremely rude. Mikoto taught Rin how to do make up, spent quite a bit of a time on it. Rin puts on make up to show up at Mikoto's wedding and tells people she isn't very good at make up? That's downright insulting.

Her focus is on males 'cause you said so . . . Since Rin in her body is completely and utterly incapable of actually being focused on males or females right now.

And really in the middle of the village in the open and Danzo thinks he can get away with doing this? I'll be extremely disappointed if that is the case.

Is Kishimoto the bad guy?
And I'm really worried that you're doing ROOT things. I've read maybe two stories, out of the hundreds of fanfics, that managed to pull off ROOT/Danzo involvement that didn't ruin the story. Making him this huge evil badguy kidnapping etc. the MC all the time - and thus Hiruzen ALLOWING Danzo to do so . . . is virtually never done well.

. . . Rin is absolutely pathetic here. And rather cruel. She's knowingly leading Obito on here, all because she's being a little bitch about things.
It's annoying when reincarnated adults in these stories act even MORE childish than the actual children around them.

I was wanting the Hokage to do something like that so badly haha. While I didn't expect Mikoto, I didn't see how Rin could refuse to graduate based on wanting to take more Kunoichi classes. The answer is really that simple, give her a female sensei. Not to mention the very fact she said No to the Hokage at all was a bit questionable . . . It always seems to me that Hokage's asking you to do something is just politely saying "Do it bitch."

I hope she burns her notes about canon Naruto and what she remembers, because writing it in "code" was fine, teaching Kakashi that code when that is written is stupid as fuck.