Are you still alive?

great story. good ideah

revive and update this please it's been almost 2 years since you made the opening chapter

I hope HK and Revan's Armor, Robes, Mask and Lightsabers are on that Ship, although I think it should have been the Ebon Hawk.

Please update

Hello, the story is great will you please post some more

mais que faisait il dans ce desert?

I can not wait for the next update of this story! This chapter is one of the best starters I have read in a while.

Well that was a bit rushed, but not bad overall. I just hope Harry won't be able to use everything he got from Revan immediately, that would be too much.

Please keep this going!

Excellent story can't wait for the next chapter

Please update again soon. Thanks.

Hope to read more of your story as look forward to seeing how it goes

dude its been three months pls update

Was the ship cloaked as it took off or not, you contradict yourself within the same paragraph.
Given that the number of magicals in Britain is probably larger than the whole Jedi Order, why hasn't the Order found them? Since Earth is apparently within 24 hours flight of Naboo, they would have been found by the Republic long before now as well as the less scrupulous factions.
The ship he got from Revan would be, at least, 4000 years old, I doubt it would stand up to anything in the modern time, you should have just given him a shuttle.

I don't really get how Revan came anywhere close to winning the fight with Harry. All a 'Force' user can do is push, pull levitate, a mild confundus and fire lightning. Even without being MoD (which seams to offer no benefit, despite how often you mention it), Harry should have had no problem dealing with Revan. No matter how powerful, he still has no defence against most of what Harry can do.

I'll reserve judgment on the story until there is more of it. FYI, it's been more than a week...