I really liked this fic but I think it could of gone for more chapters one of the idea's I had were you could of done a chapter or two of them sneaking around and trying to hide the fact that there together from there friends/peers and maybe throw in some sexy stuff too like for example they could be making out one night somewhere (maybe the kitchen or something idk) in the Nakiri estate when all of a sudden Hisako comes in to make Erina something to eat. They hear her coming so they stop and hide somewhere before there seen they find a place to hide (Idk where they hid you come up with that one I have no idea's) and are almost gonna get caught but they manege to evade Hisako and keep her oblivious after she's left they look into each others eyes and then in the fiery heat of the moment they start begin to have sex.

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10/10 great balance of plot and lemon, everything was well written and the charecters were pretty much like their anime counterparts, thank you for writing this and have a great day :)

i liked it a lot. Thanks man.

I will say that I loved this story. It was amazing and I hope you make more like it.

I enjoyed it good work

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This is always a nice story to come back to I would love another chapter but with their kids in it.

Hot lemon with a cute ending. Awesome. Thanks for this story!

Very well done I like how you made it seem natural for Alice to go to the party and not have it be too OOC, Loved it and can't wait for more of your stories :).
If I had one criticism it would be that there is no blocks of chapters just mostly dialogue. I can see that it works for you and it's really well put together but I kinda wish you'd put more detail in. Just a personal preference and a really small one at that otherwise, a great one-shot between two great characters.
Keep up the good work!

Good concept and fluid writing.

I just loved Souma/Alice shipping but your fic is just most beautiful, wonderful incredible and all other adjective existing who has given me to read in term of romance.

The relationship between Souma and Alice who was genuinely friendship in the beginning but with little moment of flirting as Souma who knows that Alice is more than attractive and seen him trying to hide it in vain makes all at once cute and funny, but for Alice, you focus exclusively on his thoughts and feelings about Souma, which seems totally beyond her because she ignores the nature and reason thereof.

This is very the most enjoyable romance story I ever read and I can surely read it again and again unending.

For that most good story, you and that story are now in my favorites list.

omg wow! I've never been a shipper of souma and alice, but this is really cute and i approve! i love how you keep alice in perfect character and that little epilogue at the end. keep up the good work!

A grate one shot loved it