ERAGON YOU SELFISH PRICK! Just tell her!

It’s an interesting parallel to how she reacted to his for fairth on those very cliffs. Loving the story so far.

This story is so good. Just noticed some nice little details when I read it again, in chapter 4 "I am no one" "Her heart belongs to no one"... How did I miss that ? Can't wait for the next update !

WHAT? Surely - SURELY this isn't the end...
Please update, I don't want this to be the end. Please... not the end... don't kill off Eragon!

Any other chapter would be fuckin amazing! Absolutely love the work:) -would also love to see a revival at the agaeti blood ceremony?!... who knows ;)

So is that it is it done now cause like it was good but I’m not gonna lie I cried at the end it was rlly sad it is really good tho

I don’t even feel like your work is fan fiction. It is so good it almost passes as Paolini. You created this amazing storyline and I couldn’t stop reading.

However, you created this huge reunion to be had between Eragon and Arya and then killed off Eragon? I was very sad. I don’t care if you have to bring him back by any means necessary but I just want to see how you would have written this reunion. You built it up so much and it was amazing. All I wanted was for Paolini to give us closure on their love story, you are my only hope.

And you’re back! The best post cycle story in the business. I’ll take this over TSIASOS any day is the week, and twice on sundays.

Eagerly awaiting updates!

K what the heck! This is amazing and I want more! Keep it coming!

Nice one

I’m so glad this was updated again.
I actually thought you (author) died in an accident or something and I may never see Eragon’s grand reveal to the land.
Pls continue to update
I love this story

Oh HELL NOOO!
pleaase, please don’t let Eragon die here.

Oh and thanx for updating again :)

I read the whole story in less then a day and after some thought came to the conclusion that I was absolutly LOVING everything about it until the time stopping incident. After that it seemed like the pace and tone of the entire story completely changed. Mairon went from being in love with Arya and seeking her attention/praise to believing she was unfit to rule and that he was being belittled, Arya seemed emediatly more lively and Eragon seemed to be definitely not on the level on a god. Also the plot seemed to change completely from being about the build up to the reunion, to for some reason the land doesn't like it when a lot of magic is used to stop time and infest Mairon to try and burn everything, (I don't really understand it) not to mention a only a fourth of all the chapters are after the change.

This is just my opinion, its your story and I do think your a really good writer. I was just enjoying Eragon being mysterious and quirky like Angela and Arya being progressively drawn to this strange new arrival.

P.S. is Eragon really dead?

I read this a bouple of years back and thought it abandoned. I'm so happy to see it's not. I look forward to it's continuation.

Man can’t wait for the next chapter