"you do you family proud" ...your?

Too slow.

update soon! I dony normally read an si/oc with many ocs but this was rlly good.. (since you read worm, Ume reminds me of tattletale haha)

dsnknsnk i ship them-

yay she finally gets trained again :3 (i binge read dis in 1 day omg)

lmao she sang black parade randomly xD

y are they singing fireflies HAHAH

I know this is supposed to be an emotional moment but, its just not hitting me. I mean all im thinking is about the yellow glass guy from far cry 5 yelling "My brothers my sisters theyve been taken from me!"

I have to say that I'm thoroughly enjoing this story! I really can't wait to see if she'll meet Shikako and they have a moment. lol

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Pog bro, this amazing i tell ya! I mean, you probably know that already. Anyways, Great work!

Love your story, just found it, can’t wait for more!

I've been reading since the beginning and I love this book the same today as I did then I get so happy when a new chapter comes out and I check every week just so I dont miss one thank you for this literary genius that you brought to the naruto fanfic universe

Nice. Actually, if she were able to learn everything about poison and senbon from that family, it'd be very beneficial towards her development. It might even prove worthy to join the hunter-nin. Strength is everything in the Naruto Universe after all.

Totally random burst of emotion. She has never cared about any of the people before.
In fact, there was no emotion in the last 26 chapters. It was more of a report, there was no emotion in the words at all. Now she is suddenly really angry, but even that feels bland and forced.

There is no emotion in this story.