This is really great. I love the part with Zay describing the paintings and then describing Maya's painting and the necklace part. And I think that it's interesting to not have a set resolution between Maya and Riley because it's realistic.

LOVED. IT.

"Are you guys playing footsie?"
Oh my God, I've read this fanfiction at least three times and it always brings a smile to my face. You did a great job with the characters and, even though the plot is not that original, you make it interesting. Love it

YESSSS!
God I love this story!

Wow, you create Lucas, Maya, and baseball REALLY well! This fic had so many great scenes and I adored the whole thing! Lucas and Maya getting all handsy and flirtatious in a way that evolved over time is exactly what I want to see! And Zay being an agent on behalf of lucaya shippers is obviously fantastic, so that part in the art room was so perf. I don't mind what you did with the Riley conflict... That's not something that I forsee having an easy conclusion, but I feel in time, it would work itself out. So all in all, LOVED THIS.

Loved it, perfectly written!

When I saw the Soap lyric, I was like, "Melanie Martinez! Soap!"
Great job on the story! This was really good. Tiramisuspice is the best author ever. She is so good.

Beautiful

Beautifully written.

I really enjoyed this story. I think it's realistic to not have a resolution for Maya and Riley, especially since trying to fit it in to the arc of this without rushing it would have taken probably another couple thousand words of more. And this way, it could honestly go many different ways from where you left them. I loved all the moments between Lucas and Maya. They were in character and lovely. I gotta love Zay in this, I love the dynamic of him bring all humor but also so very insightful when he's serious. Overall, great job!

Tiramisuspice is amazing