Reviews for Souls Entwined
dsfargeg chapter 11 . 11/27/2017
This is why I don't read Undertale fanfics: they're practically hard-locked into the hamfisted political agenda the game loves so much. Monsters Good, Humans Bad (unless of course the humans concerned are allies, who will unconditionally surrender acres of land, rights, everything to a thousand or so monsters coming up from underneath a mountain.) Pacifism Good, Violence Bad, and there's never anybody who's willing to kill you regardless of what you try to appease them with. Goddamnit, it's all the worse when Toby Fox has decent music and very good characters. Then, I just feel like it's wasted potential.
And even worse is the laughably heavy-handed way of putting this across. When in the hell did Chara suddenly become such an expert in politics, or were these straw politicians just that retarded? It's all well for jokes, lol, look at the stupid politicians, but this is a decently serious story most of the time, and that part does not come off as anything less than pandering with a dash of Mary Sue.
jigger chapter 4 . 11/27/2017
implying that the (((media))) wouldn't welcome a free source of labour and one more faction to play against native Europeans
Mernom chapter 11 . 10/16/2017
Well, that ended well. Now, to make sure it stays well.
Mernom chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Probably the least of their problems, but now Chara will have to deal with the consequences of experiencing male puberty as a female soul. Probably a good thing that she died before really experiencing female puberty, because that would probably be even more awkward. Also, there's the whole bathroom problem to deal with...
Mernom chapter 5 . 10/15/2017
Funny thing about split minds: that's actually a real thing. The brain is made of two halves, each one controlling the opposite side if the body. But only one half has access to speaking. The two halves are connected, but if they get disconnected, the 'mute' half will be able to perform actions independently, and the other half would not be able to explain them normally. Almost as if the other brain is an independent consciousness, living in your head.
ivanganev1992 chapter 10 . 4/27/2017
Ch 10 Thanks. So it was not Gaster just the incarnation
of the darkness infinity and everything CHARA was . Well ;) That should be supposed to be similar to my power if I had magic . And still would be one fourth of my power . I still would use dust , portals , vortex , and vortex energy radiation, Temporal lava field , falling fast heavy things , and then the corrupted elements of antimatter and the gathering the dust is basically echo of previous collected energy or energy mix of all used energies in one. The shadow is one of the medium power attacks so that is still frightening impressive.
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 4/26/2017
Ch 4
That is not ,it Should not be Gaster. What is that darkness?
amelia heart chapter 13 . 2/21/2017
See you soon *smiles*
348joey chapter 6 . 2/5/2017
"What could be more special than the opportunity to show Humans the place they trapped us in for centuries?" Papyrus is fun.
348joey chapter 5 . 2/5/2017
Huh. It's actually getting significantly more interesting and action-packed.
348joey chapter 4 . 2/5/2017
He could've just kept the phone off in Hotland.
348joey chapter 3 . 2/5/2017
I liked that last line.
348joey chapter 2 . 2/5/2017
How does a metal robot blush?
Ugh, always hated PapyrusxMettaton.
John smith chapter 13 . 12/28/2016
And may another fic be spewed from your computer, to be consumed by us bottom feeders of
Ringcaat chapter 12 . 11/21/2016
This chapter had so much happy and made me laugh happily so many times! I'm in a happy mood tonight though. My review for the previous chapter still stands. But it seems odd that things are being wrapped up without anyone being worried about the Defiler coming back or trying to work out what exactly he was (beyond a Chara-like thing) or what happened to him!
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