Well written and the story achieves its aims. I don't like what you did with Reinette, I liked her much better than Rose in the series. Rose with nine was delightful, with ten...not so much. Still you deserve praise for completing your vision well done.

Really wonderful story! Loved it! Great work!

very cute

I loved reading this story.

I loved every single moment of this story, from the toothless smiles to the stargazing nights! I also loved Jackie and Amy and Rory, I hated Reneitte, and I hated Jimmy Stone even more! And Jack was absolutely hilarious - you did a pretty good job there! You definitely have a great little story here!

Absolutely lovely. So glad you didn't go another way with the ending.

i loved it!

This is so beautiful! I love stories which show time progression! Good job!

Wow just wow...brought tears to my eyes and a smile to my face.