Shit-fic. Naruto is a dumass

please make more chapters

not bad at all. I would bring back the line spacing from ch 1 though, other than that it's a very good fic. I look forward to seeing more of it

this was just so cooool

kill minato, tsunade, jiryia, and kushina, andif possible Naruto's ex sisters.

i vote for the female sasuke pairing.

Great story and idea maybe give him a resistance seal instead of weights because his body can take it also if shoton is a mix of minerals(earth) inder preasure(wind) then training those can result in a stronger crystal formation i'm only saying this because shoton stories usually only focus on shoton and i hope that this doesnt happen in this story. Anyway keep up the good work.

ugya ugyaaaaa,,,, this story is cooler than the story I wrote, keep this up buddy I really like it, really really like it,

If what you say is true than I happily await your next updates please show the your talents and make this a fantastic story

cool idea,i like it,but don't bash chachers like most the abandoned Naruto Fanfiction,it will ruin the story.
will you give him power from the shinigami?!
like some death powers?!
because i don't know how can he use shoton,it is not Death God power or his parents,at last give him some power that connect him to the ability that realted to Death like Zeref Powers or Barragan from Bleach,some ability that make him unique.
i hope Fem!sasuke will be in the pairing(it's rare).

that's a cool story.. basically the shinigami made him her son