Excellent!

Ah! Party banter, I have missed it. Talent pulls out some DA2 trailer spell that rocks the party for a moment. And of course Eren begin to get under our Wild Witch’s feathers. It’s been a while since I’ve seen this story update but I’m glad to hear you’ve got Orzammar covered. Now, now to the Anvil of the Void. I wonder how Branka is gonna be received?

I’m honored to hear I’m an inspiration for you. Too few review our stories but I hope to keep giving you encouragement and a kick in the shin if you slack. XD

And back into the thick of it! Killing things and chopping them into little darkspawn chucks... can you tell I was waiting for this? XD

Starting every paragraph for the entire chapter with " makes the story a bit boring.

She lives! Welcome back and by the Maker’s beard you came back in a blaze of gory fun! Great job!

Cannot wait to read the rest when you finish. I really have enjoyed the story so far.

I loved Nia's reaction to the darkspawn. Very realistic and I don't even want to imagine the smell

Oooh my goodness! I love Zevran! I always have a thing for tragic dudes even if Alistair is a sweetheart

Yeah! Bonding time! Also I would like to see Halo's true form one of these days

Oooh boy, Flemeth isn't a weak enemy what withturning into a Dragon and stuff

Bonding time! Everyone is slowly coming together as a family

Aeww poor Eren. I really feel for him. Still so much emotions! This rewrite is thebest

Aaaahhhh! So emotional! The rage frustration, sadness coming into one was amazing

I still think Eren's dream should have been longer but oh well

I remember being a little disappointed that Nia didn't get a dream sequence but it's all good!