AHA? AHAHA? IM NOT OKAY? OKAY!

Hi! I like your story. No fault, great story! I like to continue with a sequel and I like Rio. The relationship with Jefferson is a wonderful idea! Just continue! ( sorry for my bad english, I am french)

Oh god. I am flipping my shit and this made mE SO SAD!

I have a request. A sequal where max figures out how to save Rio and keep Chloe alive. Judy a thought.

A fitting end I think. I could feel the feels when rio was holding Lex on the ledge and I couldn't help but think about my own sister, so great job with that :) I'm also definitely going to listen to that song, just to complete the experience ;)

Anyway, I'll follow you as an author to see what other things you put out. Thanks for giving me something to read these past couple of weeks :D

Honestly, with the previous chapter I was convinced you were going to have (in the bathroom scene) Max dash out from her hiding place to stop Nathan after being unable to get the hammer from Rio. In doing so, Nathan would panic and accidentally kill her instead. Then I was expecting Rio to spend this chapter trying to fix everything.

I like this end though. The whole time I was hoping Rio would die and now I'm wondering if I ever truly wanted that to begin with.

DUDE! Such an amazing chapter! Lol the part with Rachel showing up was really interesting and it certainly added a lot in regards to flexibility with the story. I'm soooo excited to see what Rio decides to do, because at this point, it's hard to tell what she does, ever!

Anyway, I eagerly await the next (last?) chapter :)

At least Rio has her head on straight, I think lol it's hard to tell with her still feeling something towards Mark. But she has the good sense to threaten Mark with death, and to be honest, I'm not sure if she's gonna do it, which makes it even more exciting :)

Anyway, I look forward to your next update!

Brah, that ending though. Where the fuck are you going with this? I'm scared. Aside from that, I like it I feel like at that one part when Rio was thinking about Max, she kind of split herself then gave nto darkness. Mark is a sick ass bastard but I like him. I wanna do a thingy about someone dating a serial killer and them know but not give them away. Yusss. I love it. 3

Bruh! Rio! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? lol VERY good chapter, I honestly don't know what's going to go down, because I thought things would be all well and fine after the last chapter, but then you go and do this? Crazy times, man, I'll tell ya...

It will be interesting to see how all of this plays out, and I certainly can't wait for your next update :)

It's 2am as I'm writing this, so I'll make it brief. The story is fantastically written, the descriptions and good choice of words make it very easy and interesting to follow! I had difficult understanding the nightmare scene in chapter 12, but it makes sense now seeing as how she was having a stroke. I think lol. The pacing for the fic was very fast in the beginning, which threw me off a little bit, but it turned out pretty well. I wish we could see a bit more of Lex as well, but I digress. Anyway, I'm very excited to see what happens next!

I hope you update soon :)

This is amazing, i love it.

this is clever how you are doing this story. with the take photo or intervine they could do both at the same time which helped nicenwork

Oh my god, I love this story so much! I can't wait for your next update.

LOVE THIS!