| Reviews for To Have a Second Chance |
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HipposAreAwesome89 chapter 16 . 7/17 Fantastic, second time reading! |
HipposAreAwesome89 chapter 9 . 7/17 Cool story |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23 I’m so glad your writing . I’m going sit here and read in your world instead . To Have a Second Chance is the best ! Can’t wait for more ! |
Guest chapter 43 . 2/27 good story |
Murai-Sakura chapter 43 . 10/21/2019 I wish Harry had been able to do more. Now he just ran in there without actually being useful in any way but I guess he was only eleven. I was really scared that you were going to execute Sam there for a second. I'm glad you didn't though he really is dangerous. Honestly, biting people just because they want you to take your potions. Bad fox! I did enjoy this story. You said that you feel that the second part of this story was less inspired? Well, I don't think so. It was good! I honestly could do without the spankings but they won't stop me from continuing to read what is clearly a very well-written and interesting story. I wonder about second year. Does Harry know Parseltongue? Probably not. But what if he does? I'm looking forward to it! MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 34 . 10/21/2019 That was sooo hilarious! Thanks so much. It had me giggling all the way to the end. Too bad Snape had to find out that Harry had something to do with it. Wonderful chapter and I'm happy that even the Slytherin table joined in to take the blame; Aaah, you especially had me going when Snape assigned detention to everyone. Amazing! MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 27 . 10/20/2019 Hurray! He made it into Gryffindor! I love how understanding and sweet snape was, especially near the end. It was really heartwarming and sweet. Draco is a prat but what else is new. I have to go to sleep now but this sequel (is that what it is, a sequel?) you made 'To destroy a second chance' should I continue reading this before I read that or can I read it already? It sounds very cool and interesting. |
Murai-Sakura chapter 26 . 10/20/2019 Augh! You evil minx. Your title chapter made me believe Harry would get sorted in this one. You had me going there. Roar! Got me all excited too. With Draco as Harry's best friend, I really wonder if Ron's even going to be in the picture. Why would he even it with Harry on the train? Oh, no! MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 25 . 10/20/2019 Yay! Hogwarts is coming! Slytherin or Gryffindor? Ooooh, I hope it's Gryffindor. Snape is gonna be heartbroken when Harry goes through that rebellious phase! For a moment there, I thought Harry wasn't going to get Hedwig. But honestly, Harry, a temper tantrum? When you're 11? and you already lived to be 20? Bad boy. How awful will Snape be to him in potions if he winds up in Gryffindor? Ooooh, the possibilities! |
Murai-Sakura chapter 24 . 10/20/2019 Acromantulas are bloody terrifying! Harry truly is an expert in getting himself into trouble, isn't he? It's a miracle that Snape hasn't shackled him to the wall yet with his constant disobedience and whatnot. And it's probably only going to get worse once he gets to know Ron. This was a great chapter! You said it was hard to write - that happens sometimes - but it was really cool and exciting. I enjoyed it very much. So thanks! MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 23 . 10/20/2019 Well, I'm just going to assume that the word they used was Hajime. Did you do any form of Japanese martial arts/ martial sports or did you just look up the words associated with them? Though I have trained with bokken myself and they're really not as much 'sharp' as they are heavy and could certainly be used for some blunt force trauma. And this comes a tad late but two one would try to diminish the contact between katana as much as possible since it dulls the blade and those swords were very expensive, unlike swords used in medieval combat which were more about brute force and less about finesse. But I am rambling about things you probably care next to nothing about. I apologize. It was a fun chapter to read and I'm so happy that the wishing potion has finally been created. It will probably be used for something much more important than a ginormous chocolate frog. Oh, Harry. Where's your adult brain at, child? MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 22 . 10/20/2019 Ha! Cleverly named chapter indeed! Very nice. It's good that Sirius finally understood what it means to be a proper guardian. And it only took him 10 years! smh I hope Snape is not gonna have Harry wear all that protective gear at Hogwarts. They don't even wear helmets there! Or do they? I don't think so... Anyways, I feel as if I'm nearing the sorting point. I still hope he makes Gryffindor. Will you surprise me and put him in Hufflepuff? Probably not. MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 21 . 10/20/2019 Augh! I had hoped that Harry would've received a broomstick for his tenth birthday! But, no suck luck. Just so you know, I am stealing your idea for a birthday or Christmas present for dear old Snape. I hope you don't mind. But I thought it was rather brilliant of you. The Weasley twins are a hoot, as they always are. Excellent chapter. MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 19 . 10/20/2019 No! Snape is gonna kill Sam! Ha, I know he won't but man, that's gonne be intense. I love the twins and I'm so happy they're joking around with Harry! And Charlie as well! Yay :) Thanks for the PM. I really am enjoying this story so far but it's gonna be a while before I catch up, I think. You're distracting me from writing! Haha Well, chapter 20 is next. MS |
Murai-Sakura chapter 17 . 10/20/2019 Cool! Some Japanification! I love Japan! For a moment, I thought you might have written a cross-over of some kind but I guess not. Lol, you even incorporated the suidice forest and everything. I hope Harry doesn't tell Snape but does tell Dumbledore. Of course, your story is complete so I know my review has no effect. Only one way to find out! MS |