I guess it's been awhile since you've updated this. Bit I just finished all 20 chapters and gotta say, I love it. I hope you revisit this fic sometime soon.

Update please...
Make Jaune semblances Gate of Babylon, the downside is every time he use it he become arrogant

Your grammer is terrible. Find an editor to double check your writing. Sorry, but I can't continue to read your story, otherwise.

God it's so hard to read because of the way you portray the characters. This doesn't feel like Jaune at all. More like a OC. And Yang just isn't Yang. No puns, not funny, barely anything lewd from her, her bombastic personality is next to nonexistent. The only reason I know that it's Yang is because her name is Yang. Etc...

My Dark Prince...!

ok. this is nitpicking, but the exchange ratio doesn't mean they get more money. they get more currency... but by the nature of the exchange, they still have the same value. if you were trying to say the crown is a more valuable currency then lien, they should actually have less after the exchange because every 1 crown is the equivalent of 3 lien.
ok. I'm done nitpicking for now.

I apologize if you like this story, it's just my opinion.

Up until this chapter, I was willing to try and bear through with this. But now I can't. This doesn't feel remotely like Jaune, more like what you wanted him to be. The references to other characters from things that honestly don't blend well with RWBY just makes me lose interest in the story, all this stuff about how this hidden kingdom that supposedly hasn't had very much contact with the outside world suddenly having the most advanced technology, this random woman being able to make anyone nervous, and the omakes where Jaune is the butt of the jokes are just overdone.

I came here thinking that it would just be everyday, lovable Jaune having known Yang and Ruby before Beacon. I leave it thinking that the author should have just done a Fate story.

That was really good storytelling, I like it

i meant doesn't

random comment that does have anything to do with the story per say
my favorite blondes are Glynda and Jaune

Any chance we'll get a sequel to this?

I want more:,,(

I'm loving the story so far. I'm glad to see all the references the ones I understand at least like the comparisons to some fate characters and CID. also is there a connecting story but came before this I feel like I'm just missing information or it's because I have limited knowledge on the Fate series. the puppy love relationship between Good Witch and joune is cute. I don't quite like the royalty angle but I've seen worse and I'm glad you didn't make it extremely dark like many fanfiction with his family involved. if this really is a dragon slayer story I really really really hope this one finally has a good ending many that I've read recently have had extremely dark endings. don't actually spoil it though.

you mother fucker cid really;)