Reviews for One of Us
tigerangel05 chapter 3 . 6/5/2019
Love these types of stories... wish you would finish this... it's a really good story, I know you haven't updated it in a long time!
Alfys-World chapter 3 . 3/23/2019
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Trex Guts06 chapter 3 . 8/6/2017
this is amazing i hope you update soon its soo interesting and how you describe the relationships they all with one another and how you just have it is aww
Star197 chapter 3 . 9/14/2016
This is amazing! I hope Gray and Juvia can be together!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Interesting story so far :)
Anon chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Loved it!
apitatoor chapter 3 . 4/24/2016
Hello again Bri!
1st of all have to say thank you so much for updating this chapter!
2nd I AM VERY SORRY FOR THE LATE REVIEW!
I am not going to make excuses but the truth is I got sick pretty badly & I had to go to work at the same time, which is a bad combination. Plus, my studies were taking a lot of my time, so I kept pushing for the next day.
So really sorry for being a jerk but for give me!
But I am really happy you updated!
I loved this chapter!I love reading a smitten Gray! It was just so cute!
I liked how you started the chapter with Juvia going to places to look for the job, & how optimistic she is as well.
I really liked reading the interactions between Juvia & Evergreen. Plus, giving the back story of all of the Thunder tribe was pretty neat & awesome as well!
Plus, poor Bixlow! He got it bad!
I am going to be honest, I loved the next paragraph! I mean, reading a jealous Gray?!
Seriously, Bri! You rock & you are just amazing!
The way you wrote his emotions & displayed them was just awesome! I mean, it was unique, you know? Very creative! Using his aura & Natsu & Lucy observing him & noticing so many emotions going through him.
It was really fun to read!
So loved the whole paragraph!(I really love the whole chapter! Really!)
I liked how Erza acted, being the like the mother hen/big sister to her friends & how she was trying her best to make Gray's problems easier.
But, I was sad that Makarov was acting that way! I mean, it is understandable that there has been a blood war between the vampires & werewolves for ages but he should be open minded & keep the possibility in mind that not every werewolf is bad!
Plus, Gray is in love with Juvia, his love story will end before it even begins!
The Gruvia conversations were the best! Juvia was so cute!
Plus, Gray getting shy & trying to get to know Juvia more, just adorable & sweet!
I loved how you ended the chapter with Erza going to meet Jellal & by reading I think they are not in relationship yet,(but can't wait for some Jerza time!)
I hope Juvia & Gajeel get accepted!
In all, this was a super duper fun & incredible chapter!(with awesome Gray's emotions in it!)
So, Bri hats off to you!
So take care & until next time,bye!
Jenny chapter 3 . 4/20/2016
I love this story! Can't wait for the next update. :)
Kayla chapter 3 . 4/13/2016
I absolutely love it! Keep going! :D (I can't wait to see some Gajevy start to happen *nudge nudge wink wink*)
idek.writings chapter 3 . 4/12/2016
My favorite thing from this chapter was literally Lucy calling Gray "Graysicle". I love the brotps! Especially the gratsu and Gajuvia Brotp. And they finally spoke in do excited for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2016
Thank you for updating this wonderful awesome story. I love how things have come along with Gray and Juvia, love how you have added different species of monsters and so on and given a backstory for each one. Hopefully Makarov will see reason and change his mind. I do look forward to the next chapter...but I know you have your other works to update, which I also like reading. Thank you once again.
Pocketwoman7 chapter 3 . 4/12/2016
I loved this chapter so much! I hope Kansas doesn't bore you too much. I live just outside of Wichita. Anyways yay this chapter was amazing.
doublehack chapter 3 . 4/11/2016
Wow I really liked this chapter, this story is seriously growing on me haha. You did your research, so much information, I love your descriptions and backgrounds. Also I like the fact you didn't make Makarov accept it too quickly, it would've been a bit easy, I was afraid of that :p. I really like this universe you created, maybe you could do some sketches from it one day, wolf juvia, dark angel lucy, it's unusual but really cool. Thanks Bri !
claudiacorvo chapter 3 . 4/11/2016
I liked very much all I read untill now, so keep going, I'll like to see what happends now!
Evilkitten3 chapter 3 . 4/11/2016
JELLYBEAN! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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