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Sanzojoe chapter 2 . 8/30 I like that you adde both perspectives |
DG and Reed chapter 2 . 12/17/2017 Aw. I totally enjoyed this! |
Dark Azarathian chapter 2 . 1/2/2017 So Robin played father for her? Cute. I just love BBRAE. And the way Robin plays elder brother for Raven. Poor Beast Boy, he nearly killed himself, misinterpreting Raven's words. All in all, it was a great story. |
Creepingwillow9 chapter 2 . 12/31/2016 This is awesome! Personally, I liked the idea of making it a two-chapter story because you got to see how Raven reacted to everything. This is definitely in my top 5 favorites from you! :) |
VladimirVamp chapter 2 . 7/10/2016 I also thought it was a poetry and I'm glad u made a point of view of Raven |
fangirl4life03 chapter 2 . 7/6/2016 I have to say, this is one of the best stories I have ever and I'm trying to catch up on the rest of your stories... you probably forgot who I am and my stories (that i will continue soon) but it's ok and I have read the rest of Forgive Me awhile back but I never told you what I thought... I think it was amazing and the ended with the whole bet between everyone was hilarious! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories, keep up the great work |
crystalclear123 chapter 2 . 7/5/2016 Nice. I liked this, it's just as full of emotions from Raven's POV as it is from Beast Boy's. I liked especially Raven's descripsions of Beast Boy's feelings thourought the chapter. |
RPGPersona chapter 2 . 7/5/2016 So here the the other POV. I forgot to mention it in your last update, but I am glad you are recovering well from your surgery. With the flashback, we have confirmation that Raven was dropping a hint to Beast Boy that she liked him. Interesting, from Beast Boy's perspective, we saw how his misunderstanding left him numb, but Raven was unable to sense any on Beast Boy's emotions after the event. I see, if in response to Beast Boy's numbness she spent more time with Robin, that would add fuel to Beast Boy's misunderstanding. Eventually his jealously leaked out, which Raven caught. It seemed that was the spark to spur Raven to action, good thing too. Feeling he had hit rock bottom, Beast Boy let out all his emotion, which almost overwhelmed Raven as she approached. She actually had to crawl the rest of the way due to how strong they are. She was just in time to save Beast Boy's life. This time we got to see the feelings that Raven felt as she understood what was going on. Having both perspectives add a new layer to that heartwarming moment. Right, I guess with the whole white cloak, Beast Boy has already seen Raven in white, while Raven has to use her imagination. |
fangirl4life03 chapter 1 . 7/2/2016 Ok ok wait a sec... It felt so long ago when I first read this and I didn't even know u wrote this... And it would be great if u did do a version in Raven's POV |
crystalclear123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 Huh, I was sure I had reviewed this before, I remember reading it. Anyway, it's so sad to think what could have happened just because of a misunderstanding... so many feelings in there. As for your question, yeah, I'd very much like to read it in Raven's POV, it would be nice. |
RPGPersona chapter 1 . 6/28/2016 I could have sworn I reviewed this story before. I definately remember reading it. To answer your question. I would be interested in seeing Raven's perspective in this story. Of course, only write it if you want to. It is scary thinking what a simple misunderstanding can lead to. |
Lord Sicarius chapter 1 . 3/2/2016 I actually read your profile before I ever read one of your stories, and your profile is what convinced me to read this. I couldn't agree with you more, and I love your thoughts on BBRAE vs RobRae. It just doesn't work and isn't right. Great story and wonderfully written! |
XxCaptainPirateKingxX chapter 1 . 1/22/2016 I really want to see this story in Raven's P.O.V. Anyways loved the fanfic! Keep writing m! PEACE! |
BBRaeveryday chapter 1 . 1/16/2016 was beautiful |
BBRaeveryday chapter 1 . 1/16/2016 this story made me cry |