i have a query. this is like their third first date(that day at the mall, then the bonfire, now this one). is she minimizing her relationship w embry here?

Alright, she didn’t forgive him completelymore like a cease fire. That’s a middle ground I can walk. Nicely done.

No, no, no, no. The pack kept her in the dark when she needed help- she asked for help. That’s not something friends and family do. That is not a respectful, healthy relationship. That’s rude as fuck. Jacob was a dick. He could have been her friend from the get go, and she would have been fine. So having found out about the imprint, after being shoved to the side for who know how long, her first response should not be “how can I help him?”. Fuck that. It should have been “thank you for the validation that I’m not insane. Fuck Jacob. Jacob can sleep in the bed he’s made.” She a push over who’s going to end up playing second fiddle with her sister’s sloppy leftovers.

If Nori ever accepts her sister’s sloppy seconds, I will lose all respect for the character you have created.

This story is really good, very glad there’s a sequel

I honestly got triggered over Jacob imprinting over Bella's daughter. Meyer's did him so dirty like that. Like...he imprinted on the daughter of the woman he loved.

AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO SEE'S SOMETHING WRONG wiTH THAT?

Just read story for the third time and love it still. Just sad that u don't update anymore your second book, i'm just curious what will happen.

how come they're not talking about how embry might find his imprint too?

I do like that Nori is trying to find a loophole to the imprint thing by thinking of reaching a platonic agreement with Jake.

Also, love her calling Bella on her bull shit.

It's a little hard not to make Bella into a bad guy when her canon actions are pretty much the height of selfishness.

Honestly, even if she HADN'T spent time with the pack, her opinion of vampires was still going to be low because A) LAURENT TRYING TO EAT THEM WAS HER INTRODUCTION TO VAMPIRES (that's a wee bit too hard of a first impression to "get over"), B) Victoria, ANOTHER VAMPIRE, is actively trying to kill her sister (and possibly her and Charlie as well for the hell of it), C) the Cullens left Bella as a clinically depressed zombie that needed therapy, and D) the entire reason A and B happened is, wouldn't you know it, BECAUSE of the Cullens being around Bella.

Gee, it's almost as if Nori has legitimate reasons for hating vampires that has nothing to do with the pack.

Embry/Nori. Jacob is a f*cktard

Um, Bella's name is Isabella, not Isabelle...

Wow. Cliffhanger ending. I can't wait to look for the sequel. Thanks for a great story.

Absolutely right. Jacob needs to grow a pair and Bella needs to wake up to herself and her absolute selfishness. She wants Jacob to traipse after her when she doesn't even want him. I'm very interested to find out what Nori is going to do about it.