Despite what others say, Kirito most certainly has enough character to him for there to be an out of character Kirito.

I really enjoyed reading this I think its an amazing idea. I do hope that you continue this story and add more chapters to it. Otherwise 10/10

tbh i really enjoyed this especially since this story had more than 1-2 chapters but even tho it had 11 and i was hoping it was going to go on longer i cant complain because this seems like its already rapped up from the time stamps of when the story was made(2016) and when its was updated(2017) i just found it just now in 2020 but all around this story was amazing if this does have more chapters like it said in the notes on chapter 8 when i seen 8-13 i was like will there be 2 more but then i remembered that i found this 3 years after it was updated. if i was rate this story from scale of 1-10 i would have to say its a 10/10

And...the story is dead

I hope you come back to this story someday. It is covert well written and I just loved the action. It was very similar the Anime and I loved how you had Sirzech come in and demonstrate a little of his power so we know how much club has left to grow. Keep up the good work.

This is awe some

Well, apparently that's the first time i'm reviewing that story, even though i've read it quite a few times so far (speaking of, i hope you update again at some point) but i'm gonna have to use this opportuity to answer renextronex's last review:

Actually, no, it is not "canon" that they did the deed in SAO. At this time (or at least, as far as i am in the novels), it was never even once mentioned. I'm not saying it didn't happen, because it is a possibility, but it has neither been confirmed nor denied. Meaning it is up to the reader/watcher/whatever to make their own ideas on what happened. And that leads to three possible answers. The first one: "They did it." The second one: "They didn't do it". Or the last one, my favorite: "Whether they did it or not is their business, i'm not losing sleep over it."

Of course, there was that little ero novel written by Kawahara himself, where they did have sex after the deal with Kuradeel (oh! rhymes!), but Kawahara did add a note to it saying, more or less, "that's not meant to be canon, i'm just having fun". I think there's also one about Lizbeth, and another about Sinon, and i wouldn't be surprised if he also made some for Sachi, Silica, Leafa (or Sugu), etc...

so, no, not certified canon. (although my take is, they may have had sex between the time they bought the house on Floor 22 and the time they found Yui, but AGAIN it is just my take).

Besides, let's not forget, whether they did it or not in-game, once they got back to the "real world", they lost the ONE incentive that would make them having sex a 90% happenstance: IDD. Imminent Danger of Death. Which was the ONLY reason they could have done it so fast in the game. (Again, assuming they did it). By "fast", i mean that they only started dating on that specific night (the one after the Kuradeel event), took a few weeks off, found Yui for a few days, then got back on the frontlines for the final battle. A very short window of opportunity.

Once back IRL, they lose that sense of imminent danger, and hence find the need to take things slowly and really build their relationship and, more importantly, HEAL from two years of physical inactivity. That's why i think that, IRL, and in the original story, they haven't done anything before the end of Phantom Bullet. Because, as far as i know, that's the first time, for Asuna at least, where they can realise that just because the Game was cleared doesn't mean all danger has been overcome.

And Phantom Bullet happened somewhere between four and six months after Fairy Dance, if i'm not mistaken. Which is neither slow nor fast.

Now, in that story, with DxD thrown in the mix, the danger may be a little higher, but because Kirito was "devilised" AFTER Asia's death and subsequent resurrection, all they have to really see it is... a match where NOBODY DIED. And Asuna has been out of the hospital for a couple weeks at best. The urge has yet to kick in, so i seriously doubt anything of the sort will happen until the night before the final fight with Kokabiel.

SAO ff writers are a bunch of prudes, is pretty much canon that they had sex in SAO so why so much hesitation to even imply that they do it IRL?

Basically canon, except giving Issei no redeemable qualities or scenes yet somehow still having every girl lusting after him for literally no reason.

So far Kirito is kind of pointless. He hasn't changed a thing.

Heres hoping to you updating this gem.

where is the next chapter? update soon please

OK, crazy thought: Did Heathcliff give Kirito a fricken' sacred her alongside the seed?! 'Cause it seems to me that Kirito is pulling anything he wants out of SAO and ALO and if it's what I'm thinking then once all the other games get going Kirito's skills will only be limited by designers' ingenuity and how many world he visits. I mean, if he's linked to the seed now he'd have basically limitless skills, weapons and powers. I really hope that's the case. Oh, pleeeeeaaasse... let it be the case.

Also, I'd enjoy seeing a bit of GGO. It's a fantastic arc and I love Shinon. I know there's a lot to fever with DxD, but I was wondering if more. SAO cast was going to join in outside of brief mentions.

Last thought: had anyone considered making Klein a devil and Fuuinkazan is his rl peerage? And when they get out Klein recruits Kirito and let's him level up like the fight junkie he is, constantly teasing him about becoming a high level devil so he can bring in all his friends? *coughharemcough* Kirito, being Kirito, becomes high level in about a year and a half (which is when Mother's Rosario takes place), gains evil pieces to make his own peerage, tells Asuna and maybe they even save Yuuki and just as Kirito is getting his peerage on it's feet all this crazy shit starts going down?

...ok, that got away from me. I still love the idea of Klein being a devil though.

Awesome story so far! I hope you update soon though.

Okay, I really must ask at this point; HOW is it taking so long to update if you have more chapters written? You said as far back as chapter 8 (don't remember when that was exactly) that you had up to chapter 13 already written. So WHAT IS THE HOLDUP?

Nice chapter
Very good fight