This was a very, very good story! I love it. I am sad that it ended but as the saying goes "all good things must come to an end". But the deleted scenes are like a continuation of it so yay. Could you do a deleted scene of the epilogue? I am curious with how Batsie gets away. (Besides Joker cutting the bonds, of course.)You know he does. He always escapes. If not that is cool, just had to ask.

I absoloutely loved this story it was so well written and I couldn't stop reading until the end. It was brilliant!

This was down right exhilarating! This is the fisrt PenguinxOc that I've ever read and to be honest, this was a wonderful kick off!

Pity this fell off, hopefully it'll get a continuation eventually but if not still thanks for the good while it lasted. It was highly entertaining.

I am pretty sure the scene of Penguin entertaining a young child is probably my favorite scene in this entire fiction and I've enjoyed several. That was great. It was really natural, and it fit for the announcement that was coming - fairly predictable that Grace would be pregnant but still the scene was spot on.

I liked Grace pointing out that Jim is pretty much a dickhead to Oswald lol.

Selina is a great pain in the ass.

Zsasz was perhaps the shining moment of this chapter. I was laughing a lot about Grace's line of his humanity and having a good day. This remains quite adorable.

I love it only Oswald could see a girl murder a guy in wild self-preservation and immediately think of marriage. It's absolutely adorable...

A bit swifter than I personally like but still was very sweet...

You write Oswald really well. He's just the right mix of adorably awkward and unforgiving-ly malevolent - all as the situation calls for it. I think your OC is also a good mix of what he needs but perhaps could have had a bit more hesitation or drama in just accepting him when she previously compared mob bosses to the sorts that murdered her father. All the same, she didn't like her father much so I'm still digging it.

I coughed up water I was drinking at the line: is this sexual tension? I'm pretty sure most people wouldn't think that but it made me laugh. Aw man...that was hilarious.

Nice. Still developing well. I'm sad to note that this hasn't been continued in over a year. Sadly I didn't realize until after I'd already started reading. Pity. Always sad to see a good story fade off.

Damn. This chapter was spot on. I love it. I've been after more of Penguin after the first episode of season 4 and this delivered. Honestly I was a bit worried that in the first few chapters things would go very Mary Sue OC but this altered that for me. I love that he pulled a knife on her, ha. Really looking forward to reading more of this fic! :)

Am I the only one laughing at Penguin's thoughts like "I only just got Grace to kiss me" when he thought he was gonna die. Then, after Grace killed the guy, "I am going to marry this woman"? Lol