Ton histoire était vraiment sublime !

I dont cry and yet this masterpiece brought tears to my eyes as it is beautiful, dramatic and well worth reading however could you please write a alternative ending that ciel lives...need closure please? x

It made me cry. It's beautifully written fanfiction.

Oh my god, this whole story is so...I don't even find the right words to describe it.
The start felt very dark and I actually thought this was going to be a normal AU story, where Sebastian is a teacher and Ciel becomes his student and both fell sinfully love. But there was something wrong. Ciel was missing.
I liked the dream Sebastian had, where crows were flying against the windows. Your description was so vivid, so well written. Then Ciel appeared for the first time in his dream. And it felt sad. For both of them, even though Sebastian was only confused at the beginning. I really thought Claude was the one who kidnapped Ciel.
But then your awesome story was getting sadder. With Sebastian meeting his brother and learning the sorrowful truth.
When Claude died due to the car accident, my heart skipped a beat, since he had finally become something like a friend for Sebastian.
But as Sebastian found Ciel's bones, I actually cried! / The way you described the whole situation was sad, but absolutely brilliant. I could feel Sebastian pain. And that's what identifies a great story. To let the reader feel the emotion of the characters.
Err...Akane got what he deserved! Ciel had been such a fighter. Maybe in their next life they finally find their peace. 3
Thank you for the story! :)

Actual fucking tears! Actual tears! This is was absolutely great. You write wonderfully. This had to be the best fanfiction I've ever read about Sebastian and Ciel.

Holy shit! I LOVED THIS SOOOO MUCH! THIS WAS AMAZING!
YOU ARE AMAZING!
Please never ever ever EVER stop writing! You have a gift and it needs to be shared! I am so glad I found this fic! I loved it sooo much! I mean it when I say you are wonderful! NEVER STOP BLESSING THE WORLD WITH THIS BEAUTY THAT YOU CREATE!

this is so fucked up... thank you

Sniff it was sad

i'm so sorry you lost your fiance

Wow! that was WOW! it really made me cry! Why be so cruel?

True love is real!

Fuuuuuuuck, my life! Wha?...why?! God this was amazing and beautiful! This kinda reminded me of the movie(cause I didn't read the book) lovely bones in a way. Even when I knew Ciel was dead (I read some of the reviews) I just couldn't believe it. But I put it all together when the mentioned akane. The 'dreams' and finding out when akane got hurt? It all made sense, that Ciel was already dead. Though akane did keep him for over a year. This story showed that people would do a lot for love, even suffer.

Meant to say this too, you have a lot of run-on sentences. And I love me a good ghost story. I'm gonna keep reading.

You need to space things out, and separate the different dialogue. But, it's interesting so far.

So much feels when reading this story. First of all can I say WOW like serious... WOW! This book is so well written and the plot is amazing! Though honestly I personally HATE the ending! :'( Like after allllll of that it turns out Ciel was dead? COMMON! No just no! Why? Why would you do that to me :'( Well I guess it makes the book more cool that way though I still won't accept it.. hmp! Don't worry I loved the book though you my dear author have some serious talent! :D Felt like i was watching a real series!

Here I am, crying like a little baby at 3:30 am... and all I have to say it's... that I hate you so much (not in a bad way hahaha) I just loved this fanfiction. Was so damn good, I can't stop crying. Keep writing like this. I'll follow your fanfics.~