Awesome awesome story! Very engaging :3 hope you update it! Thank you

hey interesting story so far, I always like a stately Hux or Snoke I think they seem much more dangerous than angry unreasonable men.

I hope you haven't given up on this yet. Please continue

Really like it so far. Can't wait to see how Hux and Lorelei end up liking each other, because right now they hate each other though the opposite of love isn't hate but indifference. Looking forward to when you update. Hux is a very interesting character and I think you have him well done in this story. :)

New chapter, new chapter new chapter :D this is great, and the way your lining out your plot is unique. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter!

ooo its been a whileeee I keep checking to see if this has been updated because it's so good

Lovely story! I love anything with Hux in it. 3 Just one little correction, it's Snoke not Snokes - there is no s on the end of his name. :)

Amazing! can't wait to see what Hux has planned!

Beautiful and a very interesting angle. Please update.

This is fantastic. New, fresh. Great idea! Can't wait for the next update!

I really liked the Kylo/Lorelei chemistry, I know this isn't a brother/sister fanfiction, but what can I say, I'm not normal. Ahahah
Great chapter!
Just one more thing I think you did a fantastic job in not turning her into a Mary Sue, seriously, I know it isn't easy, but you made Lorelei a real character and not some crude caricature. So kudos for that.
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I'm so used to seeing short chapters so seeing this was a literal gift. I can't wait for the next update c:

Oh, yeah, I'm liking this a lot. I was looking for a fic that was a bit darker and had the OC join Ben/Kylo rather than fight against. I can't wait to see where this will go. Well done so far. Very excited!

This was a really good start, I look forward to the update c:

I can tell this is going to be good!