Honestly I had no problem with this story so far, but I’ll definitely look into the rewrite

Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.

I have read the untold prophecy and find this is far better

I honestly love this version over the rewritten version and wish you could finish this one up

Harem with shaak ti, aaylaa secura, luminara unduli, siri tachi, ahsoka tano, mei terumi, yugito nii, shizuka, maybe kushina uzumaki ? I dont know just some suggestions

Yeah I didn’t find anyroblems with this story, i even enjoyed it quite a bit. But i have yet to read the “remake” so hope its very close to this story.

You’re just gonna stop writing this story? Just like that? A well written and enjoyable story... and here I was hoping it would just be on break for a bit, but to just drop a story that’s popular and doing well, and by the way, it’s crap, it just makes no sense. I’m honestly disappointed, I truly expected to just have to wait a few months for a conclusion, it’s why I decided to give it a read anyway and then wait for it to be finished. but nope just dropped instead. Sigh another storyline just gone.
~Ryan

update like this one better keep up the good work

Keep a single point of view and remove the fucking With Naruto: things you wrote.

How the hell can that be called a rewrite? It a different fcking story entirely. Wtf. That was stupid. Why not just start another story and leave this one to be continued later?

Ok thank you, can you let your friend Digman14 know because that PM really bugged me when all I do is read the stories. Also I noticed it was heavily ripped. I will wait for the next chapters and will confront him on it then.

Great job shame you stopped it

I don’t see how Naruto has noticed Palpatine as a Emperor because his force powers are too strong, and enables him to shield himself from the Jedi Council.

This has to be explained accurately because to break the cloak of the Dark side is very difficult especially considering that Sidious is more powerful than Naruto.

I don’t understand his expulsion from the Jedi if he is weak in the force how can he do anything against a Emperor who has massive resources, and greater power.

Booooooo