This story was amazing!

This chapter was a good one.

I have noticed that you use army for almost everything regarding fighting. I was in the military and I can give a few pointers on this. For a small unit, use platoon (usually between 30-75 people, sometimes more). Next, company (between 100-400 people, sometimes more, and contain more than 1 platoon). After that, battalion (usually contains between 3-6 platoons, sometimes more).

This Chapter was full of romance and imagery. I truly enjoyed this chapter. I can’t wait to find out just how much they fall for each other.

Kagome: Fight for that exquisite pussy

That had me dying!

Best line of any fanficion to date, “Fight for that exquisite pussy.” Hahahahahaha.

Wonderful story. I really love all your fictions.

Amazing story. You have a really great talent for weaving this story that the reader needs to finish. So well done.

Rereading this story for the 3rd time and I’m just noticing the imagery of Kagome leaning over Sesshomaru in this chapter, making the tears fall on his cheeks as if he’s crying also. Whew, definitely tugged on the heartstrings a bit. beautiful

Fica ótima!

La volvi a leer despues De mucho tiempo. Es muy burns. Tiene De todo estube muy entretenida leyendola. Me encanto lo enamorados que estaban y los lemons. La recomiendo. Te felicito.

Been loving this story since I stumbled upon it and felt I needed to add a comment after reading the author’s note. There are many, many stories that are literally nothing BUT smutty lemons. Your story is very tasteful in my opinion and if people feel the need to have all the smut scenes done in great detail then this isn’t a story for them.

I love the way you’ve been able to keep the story moving along with the toss of lemon in when it seemed appropriate. I’ve even found some stories that seem lacking without decent sexual chemistry, whether they lemon it out or fade-out.

I don’t feel you should have to apologize for a select few people that may find it’s lacking smut. I came for the story and the character chemistry. I have not been disappointed.

my second time reading this story. all the love drama comedy and tender moments i truly enjoyed and they always say read something a second or third time it seems to get better. if you can come up with a vampire or supernatural or horror story for your next one then i will be waiting to read it cause that's how much i enjoy your stories.

Fue HERMOSO! Me encantó fue tan emocionante tanto subidas y bajadas y emociones que desbordaban de cada uno. simplemente muy recomendado y apreciado

Really enjoying this story! Very well written and intriguing plot! Thank you!