This shower scene is written so well. I love the way you write narusasu. And Naruto topping... yes please :) your writing makes be imaging the connection they share through their marks; how it would be overwhelming to be assaulted with feellings entering your consciousness. So great!

I must say it's weird seeing Sasuke with anyone other than Naruto. but your writing is so great that I can dig it anyways 3 patiently but eagerly awaiting more updates, always!

I can't. I just CAN'T with these two. they're so goddamn pure and sweet and omg. Will I ever get over sasnar bullshit? doubt it. Thank you for writing great fanfiction!

Omfg...!

Hii! This is really good! and I like the sun within me story! Can I ask for Charasuke x Sasuke? please? NaruSasu rocks too!

Can i request a sasunaru lemon? I dont know why most of the fics now adays are mostly narusasu? Quite frustrated though cause sasuke is mostly portrayed as slutty which he is not! I believe there is no permanent bottom on their relationship onowing their character!

Can i request a sasunaru lemon? I dont know why most fics now a days are

This is the best thing I have ever read. I'm blushing so hard right now

You're so awesome.

Not really into the Charasuke x Sasuke, but I do enjoy their interactions in the other fic! I also quite loved the first two chapters of these extras. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship, as shown here, is just so precious and loving. Thank you for the extras!

wow. I didn't know you wrote this but this is good. lol. I was wondering who was going to top and bottom lol (if they like to have sex that way, that is). Now I want to read more CharasukexSasuke. :( like it sounds really funny. And I also think it's funny cause they're probably full of themselves a bit because they're having sex with themselves.

Wow. This is fantastic, you have such a way with words :) Great job.

This was breathtaking!