Reviews for Doll
VAspera chapter 1 . 4/14
Ah yes the soy sauce. Yuya should really stock up on it.
Takuya chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Hiya canna i'm takuya the future i love it so much and do you know umbreonblue if not here is link to her fanfiction: u/4645337/umbreonblue
Yuya: huh takuya why are you here?*nerve*
Shingo: aren't you commenting this?
Yugo: don't say a word about our business
Yuri and yuto: or we'll hunt you down
I won't ...I'm telling others about this heh heh*whisper tone with smirk*
Yuya, yuto, yugo and yuri: what was that takuya?*susection glare at me*
um nothing *cough* anywho bye bye
Kurami Rocket chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
Wow. I freaking loved it! Especially because Yuya seemed so creepy how he was well acting all Yuya like, but saying that the guy was dinner. Again. Loved it and it definitely leaves me wanting more. Thank you for giving these stories to us *_*
hikora chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
I have one question. How did those three become vampires when Yuya didn't?

Poor Yuya. He mush be exhausted.
ShadowMellow chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
I feel so dirty reading this but it's so good I have no regrets.
blackwind chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
How wrong it for me to want more from this au?
It's writing amazingly and lefe you with a desire to read more
You got a real talent in writing and i hope you will continue

Sorry for any bad English it isn't my first languish
Lady Leaf8 chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
I absolutely loved this story!
The darkness was great, though I do question the age of the elder three (I'm guessing they were 17 or so when they were turned?) since vampires typically don't physically age.
Anyways, having Yuya seduce the victims and leading them to his manor was a terrific idea, and then later finding out how the other three do not approve of his doing that at all was nice; really put forth the idea that Yuya will do whatever he thinks is necessary to help take care of his brothers, whether they want him to or not.
The birthday scene was hilarious; Yuri tricking the other two into burning their eyes while dibbing firsts on Yuya made me think that action was definitely something he would do.
Also really enjoyed all the sex scenes, they were scrumptious!
Yuri torturing Yuya with bondage and a vibrator was along the lines of what I expected from him, but I did not foresee that he would penetrate Yuya with the vibrator still in there. That whole scene was hot to say the least.
And Yugo just barging in there with garlic powder was hilarious because I didn't see it coming at all, though looking back on it that is probably what he would do to get back at Yuri for the camera incident. Also, did I read the part when Yugo bursts in correctly? Did he really ride his D-Wheel/motorcycle into Yuri's room? Seems like it would do a lot of damage inside a house, run-down or not.
The part with trying to get the vibrator out of Yuya was hot, steamy, and had me laughing throughout at least the first half. Yugo was so adorable trying out different ways to get it out. His sex scene in the bathroom was well-done, though I was wondering about the position they were in for Yuya's body to be submerged except for his head, legs and nipples with the water continually rising (if I read that right). Was Yuya lying on the slope edge of the tub with Yugo's back facing the fixtures?
Yuto and Yuya lying out in the garden was peaceful, Yuri and Yugo's fight in the background was humorous. I love how kind and tender Yuto always seems to be towards Yuya, and it was very nice how you had him be so especially since Yuya had gone two rounds already.
The loophole (don't know if I can call it a loophole), for lack of a better word, that Yuri brought up at the end was fantastic. I felt that that was exactly the sort of reasoning he'd use; and doing it with Yugo and Yuto asleep, right there on the bed with them was amazing. Oh, how I love Yuri, his little words going into Yuya's mind and conjuring up images he can't help but be aroused by... *Silly grin*
Poor Yuya... he has to deal with those brothers of his (mainly Yugo and Yuri, I can't really see Yuto doing anything like those two but I can easily be wrong).
One of the things I love about reading your stories is how in-character they really seem to be. I also really enjoyed how you wove in dark elements of vampires, blood, and all else that comes with the package.
I'm sorry that this review is so long but I really, truly enjoyed it!
Sincerely,
Lady Leaf8
MythQueenOfDarkness chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
I so can't wait!
NarupokeeAurorafan chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
I enjoyed this chap :D ! Can't wait for the story to began ;D . Till next time bye*
Mizuhara Yukie chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
I have been waiting for another AU of Sakaki Brothers. This dark theme actually makes me excited, especially the part how all the Sakaki Brothers communicated so casually before prepared to eat their own meal while the "meal" just kept trembling in fear as one Sakaki appeared one by one. I am curious to know the real identity of the other 3 Sakakis as now I only know they are a sort of beast that feeds on human.
Larix959 chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
My I love this dark theme and yucest~ I really like this kind of stories and I was very happy reading it
now Im intrigued about his past story and he's not normal cuz those crimson eyes are a mystery aren't they? and the way he was talking... I'd love to read what happened to them so I will be waiting :D
Shyannada141 chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
I love it! (you may have tell me when its done) Can't wait for the rest!