Reviews for If I stayed
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2018
It’s been more than a year since this story has been updated, when is the next chap coming out?
landonmckenna6 chapter 5 . 7/31/2017
When will the next chapter be out?

I really hope you will still continue with the story.

it's amazing so far, so keep up the good work!

p.s. It may have been a "little" more than three weeks. lol XD
Rouge chapter 5 . 12/29/2016
Damn. Abandoned. That really sucks! Such potential wasted
hmm chapter 5 . 12/5/2016
Definitely a unique premise that is decently written to boot, which makes it all the more sad that it's cancelled. I mean, "Come in three weeks" was months ago, so I think it's safe to say you abandoned this. Darn shame.
89ingenting chapter 5 . 9/28/2016
Well, this is getting exciting. I hope you find the time and motivation to continue this!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2016
6 months W/O an update! We need more. I'm tired of reading the same Undertale story's. this is the only one I could count on!
Frostbert chapter 5 . 6/22/2016
ooOOH! this story seems really really good! just the kind i've been looking for 33 where frisk doesn't set off alone and instead you have mama toriel accompanying them and she'll probably fight tooth and nail for frisk next chapter i just ahhh i love 'frisk stays with toriel' stories so i'm! super duper hype for this! I can't wait for chapter 6 i'm so excited for the entry of undyne!
Mama M chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
FanFiction won't let me login right now, so I'll just leave a guest review. Wow, I love this fic! I always wondered what life would be like if Frisk decided to stay, too, and I kinda wished that was an option in the game. But, I guess it would be like combining two games into one and it wouldn't work... Anyway, I love how you are doing the characters, especially Toriel. I would bet that Toriel would be paranoid and overprotective no matter what, and it's plain to see that she loves Frisk, but is still scared of them leaving her. I almost hope for a Toriel vs Undyne face-off for Frisk. Haha!
Guest at d Ruins chapter 5 . 2/13/2016
Oh boy, I can't wait for the next update! Or more specifically, can't wait to see how would Toriel react *~* Awesome chappie :)
JasonVUK chapter 5 . 2/8/2016
8O Oooooohhhhh no!

: This is SUPER BAD! D8

Dx Sans, Toriel protect Frisk!
allen Vth chapter 5 . 2/7/2016
The irony was not lost in any of us. I'm glad to see Goat-Mom has become a constant presence in the story. And it's because I don't know what will happen.

And now Undyne is coming? Royal Guard captains meets Ex-Queen, how well will that go?
deathlyHealer chapter 5 . 2/7/2016
Hahahahaha oh I love this! Poor Papy... But I'm sure Frisk can make friends with them! Even so, is Undyne tries to hurt them, Toriel would through her across the Underground. This is awesome! Please update soon :)
Arashi - IV of VI chapter 5 . 2/7/2016
Love it! :D
LunarCatNinja chapter 5 . 2/7/2016
Aaaaaw. I hope Papyrus doesn't get into trouble. Although I wouldn't be surprised if Frisk befriended Undyne. True Pacifist FTW!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/20/2016
Ah, computers problems... I know them quite a lot.
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