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Liked it! Love idea of timid yet prideful loki going to foreign land.

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Update soon!

Yes. loved it. nice addition with the elves. seems very natural and fun. curious about who silver is. is that his real name? i wonder. like it so far. update soon

this is great! I cant wait for the next chapter!

I cannot wait to read what will happen next. I am curious about that Silver character. Loki was quite taken by Elves but how will they react to him (especially when he is spying them)? Why was Silver amused by Lokis staring? I want to know so badly. I hope you will continue soon.

I have a feeling Silver & Loki have a lot in common.
I'm rolling my eyes at Thor; so typical! :D

Yes finally an update! you make it seem like the characters are real and i like that. they don't seem like Oc's at all. they feel real. i like the mystery too. i'm very curious what will happen. it already seems loki is in for trouble.

liked it? i love it! Can't wait to see more! Update soon!

hi. just wanted to say i saw your story and thought id check it out. i like it. its interesting. look forward tosee more. good job! update soon.

FINALLY, SOMEONE MAKES SOMETHING ABOUT ALFHEIM! THIS IS GONNA BE INTERESTING. YOUR STORY IS AMAZING SO FAR. SO EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND HOW YOU PORTRAY THE ELVES. I"M SURE IT"S GOING TO BE GOOD SINCE YOU MENTIONED TOLKIEN IN THERE.

Wonderful can't wait to read more.

I cannot begin to explain my love for pre-Thor adventure stories! This sounds promising so far, Alfheim has always seemed like one of the most fascinating realms...of course it would interest Loki, too. :)

This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter ;)

I am so excited to see new story from you. I missed your writing. I am curious about this story and I am looking forward to next chapter. It seems interesting and I need more of this fic.