Reviews for RYBWN |
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Elchabon chapter 4 . 10/8/2019 Now that the seventh season of this series is about to begin, and since several secrets have been revealed as well as advanced the history and development of the characters. Maybe you could think about rewriting this fic or a new version, because like the rest of your creations it is excellent. Obviously I'm not rushing you or criticizing you. It is only a mere observation of a reader. Then I will wait calmly for the next update of your stories, which would be Dhampir yokai academi. Without more to add, I wish you the best. Regards. |
the shadow overlord279 chapter 4 . 3/2/2019 Really good story, I hope we see an update soon |
Devilslayer chapter 1 . 1/24/2019 You know you could have put the first letter of Naruto's last name in the title like this. R.U.W.B.Y |
Elchabon chapter 4 . 12/24/2018 Great chapter. Haha if what is getting interesting. This improves and improves. Waiting for the continuation. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! |
Reasonable man chapter 4 . 12/2/2018 Your story is not bad. You have written interractions of RWBY characters well. However, one thing that concerns me. Naruto in this fic is more like your own original character just with his name and looks. He acts to mature for his own age. We know that 16-17 year old canon Naruto was reckless and very emotional character. This Naruto acts a way too mature, just like he as an adult. I hope there will be some backstory about him being adopted by Ozpin and description of some events that connects main character with his own world. |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 2 . 10/31/2018 great job |
SlyFox9 chapter 4 . 10/31/2018 Not bad I'm glad this story is still continuing. |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2018 interesting start |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2018 Its been nearly 3 years and this story only has about 4 chapters lol. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2018 and finally we have a winner. Dude spouting bullshit about OC... What rules? You know why fanfiction exist right? To break the rules, author is a God here and he can write whatever he wants, regardless of what you think. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2018 I sometimes wonder whether crossovers are supposed to keep the characters themselves or make them another character entirely but just we the same looks. Ultimately it is a fanfiction so can’t argue with that. Cool chapter! I’m glad to see you’ve updated. With stories like these I’m always just waiting to see the pairing. Although it might not come until later I’m still much an impatient person. Anyways keep it up! |
Ryan L. Spradling chapter 4 . 10/29/2018 Neat. |
Restia32 chapter 4 . 10/26/2018 jajaj esta historia es muy buena. Naruto y ruby se ven bien juntos :). Sharon parece un ninja con esas apariciones xD. |
gwb620 chapter 4 . 10/27/2018 Awesome chapter. |
hellfire45 chapter 4 . 10/27/2018 Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I hope naruto will be paired with all four of his teammates |