Don't think it posted but could you please update this by Christmas? It'd make for a great present.

4 months...

*peeved growl*

Eagerly awaiting part 16! It cannot come fast enough!

This story is top notch! To find a gem like this is so worth wading through all the clingy and downright awful fanfics to find. PLEASE continue!

This is the best fucking fan fiction ever written I love it so much and it just warms my icy heart. You are an amazing writer and I really hope you continue it because I love it and it draws you in and I got THE FEELS from reading it. I was so upset I was crying at the end of chapter 14 when I realized I'd have to wait for more. PLEASE COMTINUE WRITING THIS I LOVE YOU.

It somewhat surprised me to find a story that saves the test rival so much, but even moreso that the OC was Christian Afghanistan. Plesantly surprised, I was. So far you have done a good job of writing Kei as a flawed Human doing his best to life as God asks, and for that you either already knew or did research. If its the latter, thank you for doing enough to make it seem like the former is just as likely.

Kei's handling of Ayano was interesting. Im quite keen to see how all of this plays out, though Ayano is a big chunk of why. I wonder often if its possible to help her become more Human. I guess that would ruin the whole point of the game, but hey, I can wish.

Keep up the awesome, Merry Christmas, blessed new year and stay snazzy!

info chan x ayano
kai x kokona

Why do you have 2 of the same story

Where da next chapter!? I miss dis

Wow,that's a lot of money

Wow that guy was a trickster, wasn't it 500000 yen? XD anyways great story so far can't wait to read more so if you excuse me I need to read more rather than write a review

Great start I want to see how this plays out

HAVE A GOOD END

I hope this story has a BAD ending. ;)

I do greatly apologize but Im starting to lose interest in the story. I think for now Im just gunna take a break from reading it and come back maybe a year from now. See you then.