I liked it just wish it was longer

One word. Hilarious! -

i'm dead. dEAD.
that was so great, funny and hot. I laughed so much.
I can't believe happy gave natsu viagra *laughs eternally*
you're amazing for thinking of this, thanks for writing this ;*

Very good

I really like the idea and how it all started, but in the end it was too rushed. You should have gone more into detail with the lemon. It was really short and since Natsu was horny for a long time (as you also stated) I'm very disappointed that you didn't write in detail how they made more love (I was expecting at least another round). But anyway, my biggest issue continues to be how short the lemon was. It's also sad that we didn't get a confession from Lucy's side. Poor Natsu didn't get a proper reply.

Heyyoo! The fic was great . I'm going to give you some constructive criticism that way you can improve? But of course you don't have to take my advice ahhah. The paragraph spacing was okay , there were some spots that weren't well spaced ,though. But now worries it wasn't too many spots. Big paragraphs scare readers hahah The smut; I think you did a good job. However, I feel if you actually are going to write smut you should write with more details . For instance instead of saying "He pulled off her panties"
you could say something like "His hands grasped the sides of her lace panties, pulling them down her hips, thighs, and ankles only to toss them to the floor." You see what I'm saying? this was fairly detailed and you did a great job! keep up the good work!

Sweet ;)

I need a sequel.. :D I'm sure Lucy would get pregant seeing they didn't use protection.. a sequel please.. thanks.. :)

This was really good! Will read more from you!
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I loved it! :D Your writing is great :)

I wasn't sure when l read the description. But l really liked this story! It was adorable, and gave me warm fuzzy feelings ) thanks for sharing your talent

I guess the amount of viagra makes natsu and lucy gone for few days xD

OMG this was fantastic! As soon as I read the title knew that it was going to be hilarious and I wasn't wrong. Very funny and nicely written story. Great job for one shot

I loved it. I kinda want to know what would happen if Gajeel gat dosed.

Omg! this... this was great. so funny and steamy. oh my goodness when I read the name of this story I just knew it would be good. but I didn't realize it would be THIS good. you outdid yourself.