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I really like it so far! You've done really well on advancing the story at a great pace, and I like how you show us the other's thoughts by switching the POV and redoing the same conversation. It also helps visualise the scene even more. Keep writing! You have a great writing style and I can't wait to see more! (Although not at the expense of your personal life. I hope everything is going well!)

Hey there! I just read your fanfic and let me tell you... I LOVE where this is going! I can't wait to read the next chapter and know what Chat is going to Tell Ladybug... Keep it awesome! :D

Can't wait to read more! :D

AAAAH *screams* omg this is so cUtE! I'm loving the approach your taking with the possible reveal! Never read a ladybug fanfic where ladybug actually proposes the idea of unmasking herself! Can't wait for more! :D

XD Great! very well done characterization! Also I'm happy to hear about your uncle! :)

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LOVE THIS STORY! You write so well! I love how cemented you are with Ladybug and Chat Noir's personalities. My favorite story I've stumbled on so far!

This is a really good story! The darker theme is a interesting contrast to the show and gives it cool readability. I can't wait to see how you do the identity telling, and the Hawkmoth stuff! Are you gonna write Hawkmoth as Adrien's dad or an OC or a different character from the show? Can't wait to find out

OMG. Loved this chapter. At first I thought there was a mistake in the file and that the last part of the last chapter had been copied here, but of course that wasn't the case. It was just Adrien's point of view. I felt stupid. xD

Anyway, make this fic darker, make it as dark as chat noir's suit. Bwahahaha. I really like how serious and enigmatic is Plagg. And honestly? I really like the idea of them not being mature enough to defeat Hawk Moth. It's exciting to know that the older they get, the more powerful they'll be.

Sorry I didn't review last chapter. I've been hella busy. But oh boy I was waiting for this. ;D

Ah yes, parents. The silent shippers.

Got so excited when i saw an update!
lol anf btw im only anonymous because im too lazy to log in from a kindle...i need a life

i love this story and cant wait to find out whats next :) this is the most well written Ladybug fsnfic i have read. Keeo it up!

Your writing flows really nicely and I think you're a cool person :)

Thank you so much for writing. I feel like I need to start with that because honestly, especially concerning this chapter, your writing is amazing. I really love how you're building on this story and how it's developing, it makes me super exciting thinking about how their dynamic might change (definitely will change) and the way you've given Marinette a completely credible reason to want to share identities and I just- Thank you so much I adore your portrayal of Chat Noir and Ladybug and the PoV for Adrien crafted so seamlessly into the narrative it doesn't feel like we're only receiving one side of the story, to conclude I guess I just love you and your writing and I can't wait for more chapters if/when you write them xxx