auf, poor sans...

... Nice. Interesting idea dude.

Ya know, it's been a while since I read this. Still as amazing as I remember.

Okay, uh, wow.
I don't have an ff account, so I don't comment very often, but can I just say:
Holy hell.
That was terrifying and absolutely incredible.
Thank you for creating this masterpiece so that I could find it and read it over and over again.
Also, fantastic work on Strange Places, too! Keep up the great work!

Spectacular! A great mix of darkness, suspense, and occasional humor. You won me over with the reference to Megalovania. Love it!

holee shoitzke

oh. SHIT.

Possession stories get more frightening every time I read them.

I wish there was a second chapter- this was a piece of art! Elegant, and well written!
I can only hope for more. Well done!

Please continue this! You're awesome for writing this, I'd like to see what happens next, psychotic as I sound, just with better puns ;)

Are you sure this should remain a one-shot? Because I absolutely love it.

really good first chapter tbh fam

To me it felt like you had all their characters down really well, not making it overly edgy and relying too much on the actual game dialogue.

I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Wow. That was amazing. Please continue this, this really caught my attention, the premise is astoundingly interesting.

Oh nooooo I love this and it hurts! ;v; I must show it to all of my friends and make them suffer ;v;

yea...I can't read this. my heart's gonna f**ing break if I read this. if sans...ever...ki-hurt papyrus... MY HEART WILL BREAK. *watery eyes* please don't. let frisk win against chara. for this story, kill flowey. omg. this story have me on the edge. don't let sans/flowey kill papyrus or anyone! i'm not even bothering with the caps anymore. don't do it