| Reviews for Breakout |
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   era-romance chapter 9 . 7/31 lol |
| NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 9 . 7/22 Very nice, thank you for writing and posting! |
| Sara Dragonil chapter 8 . 7/16 HOLAAAAAAAAA AMO tu historia ¿Cuando vas a volver a actualizar? Desde el 2016 no actualizas. ¿Abandonaras la historia? |
| ainara73 chapter 9 . 7/11 i hope you continue this story, cuz it's such a great one |
| Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 9 . 4/14 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! |
| starhoney chapter 9 . 1/27 Update update update update update plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz it's been 10 years since your last post |
| Marmot95 chapter 9 . 11/8/2019 Be careful with your portrait of luffy... He is getting a bit too childlike at points. Reading about too much whining is getting a chore... |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 9 . 9/1/2019 This fic is Sooo Great! I had great laugh and keep smiling and it was just so Good! I Love Luffy's interaction with EVERYONE! Also the talk about Death being positive and while Immortality is sad is Definitely Best Part Ever! Marco and Law keep being surprised by Luffy! Everytime Luffy cuddling or just super close with Ace and Sabo is my Favorite time! I Love this fic so Much so far! |
| Zaraih chapter 9 . 8/17/2019 I really enjoyed this and I look forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing ;) |
| dycy chapter 9 . 6/19/2019 luffy how you can be innocent like that, it's illegal. wow !you also made marco and law speechless this story is really cool, please continue this story kyuu san |
| acetwolf94 chapter 9 . 5/28/2019 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| acetwolf94 chapter 8 . 5/28/2019 Definitely only Luffy. I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| Kyotokiki chapter 9 . 5/26/2019 aaaaaaah i love it lu is such a doll and while he may be annoying he is also very lovable and endearing i cant wait for the next chapter this is simply wonderful |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/7/2019 When ever I need a pick-me-up I come and read this story. It's one of my favourite OP fics, with a nice balance of lighthearted fluff, humor and seriousness with a side of plot. The characters are on point and the atmosphere spot on. I love it. Too bad I doupt it'll ever be finished (I've waited for YEARS). |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/21/2019 Very good story |
