super pelusa lo adore lo ame hay me derrito al mil por ciento

SON DEMASIADO ADORABLES PARA SU PROPIO BIEN

hay momentos adorables siiii me encanta cuando son pareja amigos pero odio cuando hay otros metiches ja pero si me gustan juntos jaja y los enrredos y dolores de cabeza cuando molesta al jefe

The story is absolutely great, I love it. My ONLY suggestion is to please use spell check a little more often.

Very nice little story. Whether you meant to or head that way not, Nick and Judy will most likely become a couple somewhere down the line. Nick will max the academy and they wWILL be partners, and the relationship goes on from there.

Awwww! I loved this fluff! It is Grade A, make you go Dawww! fluff! And welcome back! XD Loved this new chapter and their responses to that movie. Well done! :)

Good chapter a nice interpretation of the sleep over on movie night. I liked the joke about prof of humans. It was all creative, but that was really good. Update us soon.

please add more chapters soon as possible

Lovely little tail you have here. :)

it's been a while since i read a good fic where, Nick and Judy are ambiguosly close,

i really love fics that skirt that line where it makes the "More than freinds and less than Lovers" thing shine through.

i honestly think that if those two fall in love
with one another it would be more a quiet realization deal then something huge.

been waiting for this to update, but please take your time if you decide to continue this more.

i don't mind if you have them hook up in the end or just leave a teasing hint of something more ;3

also lol at Judy's rents for the assumptions, while i do agree with the ideal that they state about your lover should be your best friend, Judy is a doe that need no buck. and she fall in love when she do, whomever it may be.

She is a career focused woman, and i respect the heck out of that :)

i think you did the freindship fluff rather well to be honest.

looking forward to the next installment.

I've missed in the stores so much, it's very cute and a unique perspective on how Nick gets things started in between the moving his career where is most of the time it starts off immediately. I can't wait to read more!

First thing I really love the style, the descriptions and the characters are pretty much the same as the movie. I read your notes and I can't say how much this chapter has been changed from your first try on it. If it was close then good job because you got them good even if you knew little about them. (Based on what you wrote about the trailer I'm guessing the movie wasn't out yet? Idk.)

What can I say. This is the type of writing style I wish to achieve someday. Enough description, nothing too heavy or extremely detailed so everyone can understand and follow. As non native I get bored or I skip pieces when it gets hard for me to follow. I'm more into dialogues and this story used the right amount. I'll surely keep reading and reviewing.

Long time no see, but great to see a new chapter. All very well written, with a few jokes here and there that gave me a good chuckle.

It's back, woot woot! And I loved the details in here, as well as how Nick was able to Hustle Finnick as his final hustle. It was fun seeing how you have Nick and Finnick interacting, as well as how happy Nick was throughout this whole chapter. I can't wait to see how that happiness shows off on Judy the next time he sees her. :D

Little error, foxes don't tend to hibernate; they're active all winter long (hence the thick winter coat most develop come fall).
Finnick will freak when he finds out about Nick's future, with certainty; he'd probably freak out even more when he realizes he's starting to like Judy as well; gruff as he is, he's definitely got a soft spot that he tries to hide, and that side of him and the rabbit would get along great.